Don't know if it was a mistake or not but the thumb image is not showing up on the link with the poetry and I think it is very clever idea going from leave me alone to not their at all.

I so relate to this piece. Wonderful work babes.

Great way of describing an inner strugle....love it!

So hard to comment on this one; it seems so clear and obvious compared to your other writings. I keep looking for the hidden meanings... (Have I gone blind? :D ) How did Elvis put it? "But I'd rather go on hearing your lies, Than go on living without you." And I'd love to hear intense whispers while I sleep... but I would like the chance to be tested with the truth.

intriging, wonderfully written

I am truly struggling here trying to understand this, so don't take offense and please forgive me for not understandingyet here is the question. You don't trust this person with the inner you, yet you do trust this person with the intimate you? Is there a difference? If there is, there isYet true, I too agree with micsteel, the other person may surprise you, given the opportunity to share with you intimately in loving honesty. (Then again, I do not know the entire situation. Only what you have shared and thank you for it, as now I have much to think about, as well as the writing flowed excellently.)

Im only guessing here but it seems to me that all your poems are about a torture soul a woman in love with someone who is not available.. he is there ..Physically but not emotionally. and the woman says she wants to know him ,, she wants him to know her but than if that what is really what she wants ..a more fulfilling relationship why does she wants someone who is no available... maybe it ,s her that is scared of emotional commitment makes great reading and when she works it all out in her head maybe she will find happiness, one day I certainly hope so but than again all good writers need a tortured soul