The Rain by FireTemptress

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Sep 30, 2005

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The Rain Sitting near the window sill The rain is coming down Trace the droplets with my eyes Heart beats the only sound The softest smile curves my lips I love this world I own The sound of raindrops on the ground Makes me feel at home So centered in my heart and mind I

Comments (6)

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Zabeth

3:27PM | Fri, 30 September 2005

So simple and touching! I like it a lot! Enjoy life and giving!

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eternalwytch1

4:38PM | Fri, 30 September 2005

Beautiul poem...

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TallPockets

5:14PM | Fri, 30 September 2005

Superb written work! Love the rhythm to this piece as well as the words. Keep hearing the old B.J. Thomas song, "Raindrops keep fallin' on my head" (TallPockets never knew enough to get out of the rain. WINK).

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Shadowmonkey

5:47PM | Sat, 01 October 2005

Ah sublime my dear, what more can be said than that. ;0)

flarkin

2:17AM | Mon, 03 October 2005

Very beautiful! Thank you for bringing a smile to my face! Nothing can ever replace those memories and I know that I hold mine dear and close to my heart. Here's to many more rainy days!

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