Secret Escape by FireTemptress

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Oct 05, 2005

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Escape Feel the sunshine on my face The sand between my toes The lawn chair presses in my flesh And my breathing starts to slow The ocean sounds so soothing now It sucks my cares away Fingers trail down frosty glass I feel the urge to play No one else around me now My own private retreat I special quiet little place To see to my own needs I giggle as I look around I

Comments (8)

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eternalwytch1

1:50AM | Wed, 05 October 2005

Wonderful work!

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SusiQ

1:54AM | Wed, 05 October 2005

Wow, super imagery. I was just there with you and that empty chair was mine... Hugs!

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TallPockets

11:50AM | Wed, 05 October 2005

Oooooh, nice work!! Reminds me of the old Rupert Holmes song, 'Pina Colada'. You old enough to remember that one? WINK. With my luck, if I sat nekkid on the beach, I would fall asleep and wake up sunburned - ALL over. WINK2.

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Shadowmonkey

4:26PM | Wed, 05 October 2005

I think at times we all have a place like that a far of dream, where we would love to be. Thank you for the moment of escape ;0)

hosebag

8:23PM | Wed, 05 October 2005

Where's the picture?

Wolfspirit

9:14PM | Wed, 05 October 2005

This is great, I loved it, I was rushing for the sensation of the water making contact with the flesh...Imagery was truly excellent... and I have to add... TallPockets, you crack me up, been there, done that! Ha-ha.

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