Street Artist VII by tibet2004uk
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Description
A 'lil experiment with postwork here.
Honest feedback wanted please! :)
Thx for ur time guys!
Camera: Sony f717.
PascaleRPhotography
Camera: Sony f717.
PascaleRPhotography
Comments (35)
rayburg
Pascale, I like this a lot..the only thing I'm not quite sure with is the top of the pic seems a little too blown out.. I love the skin tones and how you caught the two interacting..it's a great composition. Experimenting is cool ..learn more by playing around then just straight up posting. Overall, this teacher gives you an A+
kimariehere
i love it ..!! beautiful just the way it is!!! ..wonderful
DELMUR
Love this one : the post work with desaturation,(but not the carpet), the blur , the move!
cbender
well done... i like the colouring here... especially the skin's really great... but as rayburg mentioned - the strong white blend in the upper part is a bit distracting... apart from this it's really good - perhaps you could desaturate the red a tad... my five cent... :)
addiek
Tend to agree with rayburg... the washiness of it works absolutely brilliantly everywhere else (tiles muscles &c) but at the top, behind her back we lose her a bit (unlike the ivy festooned gent below). The frame is good, the red & green excellent... can we burn? It is a very good picture
maggiemai
WOW! I think it's awesome just as it is!! I like how it gradually fades away to white at the top and I love the red! Their skin is awesome and the soft tiles... I just love this picture! Fantastic in my book Pascale! VOTE
jinet
Absolutely superb picture and postwork !
gunsan
Beautiful postwork Pascale,the softness and tenderness of it almost makes it to a love scene. Well, isn't all art love?
Georgy
This is really different.I loooove the fact that it is washed away at the top.It brings me right in to whats happening.I think your treatment is perfect for this down to the thin red line to frame it.The couple seems very connected.Great work.
gwfa
in line with Christian & Ray - beautiful anyway...
DJB
Disagree with you 3...I think the whiteout is effective.It accentuates the two figures in a way I like.'tis brilliant Pascale-y
Zacko
Oh Pascale...Pascale....WOW!!! Each new upload is better than the last one. Good God, it was about time you made GOM indeed. This is brilliant!!! Did you use the "Dream" or "Diffuse" filter in VP for this one? AMAZING WORK!!! That red blankie really stands out so beautifully!!!! Brilliant work on this one to say the least....BLOODY PERFECT!!!! Have a wonderful day. #:O)
tibet2004uk
@Andreas: No sweety! I actually rarely use VP! I'd rather like to create the effect myself which I did here, playing with contrast, saturation, soft filter and so on! :)
nathalie06
Superb effect ! I like very much (and sincerly...) the post-work you've made on this one. This effect of blur give something not real to your shot, and then your subject is more powerful. The desaturation and this soft and cold light is perfect. Maybe the most impressive of your serie. But it's always a personal opinion ;o))) I love it !!!! V
Digimon
The post work is excellent! I think you have achieved the effect perfectly! You don't need advice, on this one ; )
Artzy
Awesome!
kansas
WOW! Whatever you did, the results are spectacular!
soulofharmony
well l have to say looked real hard and cant see any over exposure of the white. honest opinion, l would say very boarder line.but within. the high key works totally for this composition and its outstanding and amazing pascale..sublime :)..:)
DarkestAngel
The angle is just fine and captures the scene well. I'm looking at this on my desk-top monitor and it's perfectly acceptable to me but not so sure if it would have too high a contrast for a lappy?
TwoPynts
I really like what you did. I like the lightening of the tiles, but would have kept just a touch of tone and detail in the top area. Otherwise, very, very, nice!
thesymphonyofthelife
Tr jolie j'iame la psoe des personnages et le choix des couleurs. C'est une excellente photographie. Je te souhaite une agrble soir
donvino
Beautiful scene and very well presented! love the colortones! wonderful potography!
ovag
The blur is great. It turns the picture in a strange mood. The top is maybe a little overexposed (IMHO).
logiloglu
looks like yoga exercises for couple. wonderful colours and soft lightning.looks excellent in this frame. top notch #:O)
redbeard
Wonderful, it really highlights the couple and the color of the blanket. Great composition!
pm_hackworth
I love it myself! :) Sometimes I think disecting too much is making photography like a science. I'm not a professional like you guys but I just think art is art. Your first impression. What does it say to "you?" Does it touch your heart or mind? I loved it. Vote
Gwyn Tyger
very interesting capture.
cynlee
i like the softness but would be nice to bring a bit more detail back to the hair & here & there & by adding another layer & erasing :] luv the pose & compo!
eres
Absolutely fantastic!!!!! Get my vote...
jcv2
Your postwork seems to work as it is intended for, drawing the focus to the object, the people acting here! Excellent work!