Love me by Amalaswinta

Writers • (none) • posted on Oct 28, 2005

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eh, figured I'd share some of my stories as well... this one I wrote somewhere in June 2004: ********************************************** See me standing before you. Trying to say all that

Comments (9)

manitoba

3:40PM | Fri, 28 October 2005

I like your poem more than i can tell .. it makes me remembering........

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Storm9167

3:54PM | Fri, 28 October 2005

That poem is so totally and completely amazeing!!! And I'll leave it at that...

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BBarbs

5:22PM | Fri, 28 October 2005

Wonderful Poem. Very touching and heartfelt. Hugssssss

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luckyred

4:51AM | Sat, 29 October 2005

Beautiful...

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TallPockets

7:01AM | Sat, 29 October 2005

"Behaving like a jibbering idiot doesnt do much for a girls image." -- I do that even when I'm not smitten. WINK. MOST excellent written work!!

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romanceworks

11:29AM | Sat, 29 October 2005

Wow, this is just beautiful writing. Every word seems to come from your soul and touches my heart. V. :o) CC

svdl

12:29PM | Sat, 29 October 2005

Very well written! Very emotional, and totally recognizable. Wonderful!

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micsteel

5:12PM | Sat, 29 October 2005

Heh. :) Believe it or not, guys are just like that--the ones that are, um, wanting more than the evening with you, anyway. In fact, many guys are more afraid of women--especially women whose opinion matters to them, especially beautiful women--than of charging elephants! That's probably why so many extremely desirable women end up with such jerks: Jerks don't care enough to be afraid; they just want a conquest. The easy guys are not the ones you'll like at home. I agree with TP: Just read my comments if you want to see an idiot at work! LOL!

soulofharmony

2:49AM | Sun, 30 October 2005

But when Im alone, I speak all thats left unspoken. When I close my eyes, I can stroke your hair, touch your cheek. In my dreams, I can hold you in my arms just to watch you sleep. My dreams... my dreams end when I awake. When youre sad, Ill give you the moon and stars, just to see you smile. When you cant sleep, Ill give you my dreams to help you through the night. When its too dark to see, Ill give you the light in my eyes. Ill give you all that I have, all that I am. love those two verses beautifully written..:)..:)))