Just Friends by Amalaswinta
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Second of four of my stories I'll share. Wrote this one November 2001
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Do I love her?
No
Am I in love with her?
Maybe
Do I want her?
Yes
I think about her, with her raven black hair and steel blue eyes.
Sometimes she comes to me in my home.
We talk. She tells a joke, I laugh.
I never tell her about my thoughts.
How I want to press my lips to hers, feel her close to me.
I never tell her how I want to take off her clothes,
see her standing naked before me.
So I undress her in my mind.
She looks beautiful.
But we
Comments (12)
manitoba
It reminds me a lot........
drace68
You get your message across.
avalonfaayre
I remember that...
Actrise
Man... That was kinda sad... Awesome though... Brought back memories... ='(
BBarbs
Wow...your poem sends chills up my spine. Such a very true slice of life and experience that so many people have had. Beautifully expressed. You are a multi-talented person. HUGSSSSS
micsteel
Yes, I understand. Especially if that was a woman narrating; people are often shocked and disgusted when they hear that kind of thing. I've hand many gay friends, and many who professed to want me, but I play the sex game VERY carefully! :) Someday I may want to be president, and it wouldn't do to have to slap some donkey's tail for trying to make a big issue out of such things! :D Gender issues aside, this is a very poignant expression of grief; I've felt that way myself more than once. I talked a dear lady friend of mine through several relationships, always wishing I could tell her that I wanted to be the one, and I certainly wouldn't treat her that way... We're still friends, after about twenty years, and never lovers--dang it! :D
luckyred
Very deep and emotional writing...... from the heart....
hotracer2
From the heart is always the best:):):)
TallPockets
Superbly, written piece!
SusiQ
Oh yes, to the point and emotionally tight. Well done!
Arieanne
Thats so sad. Beautiful poem though. Very emotional.
romanceworks
A secet passion that was so beautifully expressed. I LOVE YOUR WRITING!!! :o) CC