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Moving On

Writers Realism posted on Dec 03, 2005
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"Moving On" I saw you again last night - Out of the blue - Unexpected - Caught me by surprise - Stopped me in my tracks At least I thought it was you It sure looked like you - Same curly hair - Clipped at the top - Touching those soft shoulders - Stopped me in my tracks But I was mistaken It is time to move on - Abandon the thoughts of you - Eliminate the desire for you - Stop the captivity of my heart towards you - Stop me in my tracks Walk away and never come back No longer will I be haunted by you - Your memory - Mistaken identities - Glimpses into the past - The would've, could've, should'ves Return the ghost to the closet and leave the house behind There is another - Soul mate - Confidante - Lover - Stops me in my tracks A true blessing from Heaven To her I give my life - My thoughts - My desires - My every heartbeat - Time has stopped in its tracks And she is my bride So I turn from you - Not looking back - Conscience clean - The past in the past - Stopped in its tracks And I say, "Goodbye." J.P. Wiegand *********** Lisa and I went out to a local coffee shop and I thought I saw Jill (see "A Year Ago This Week", "From One Kiss to the Next", "Wrapped in Unconditional Love", and "No Costume Required") - I was wrong, of course. It has been so long, it seems, that I thought I had successfully escaped her. But apparently I was wrong. I woke up the next morning with that overwhelming desire to write. Above is the outcome. Conclusion? I'm not concerned about seeing her again. I've given myself closure. I'm "moving on". -j.p.

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eternalwytch1

12:08PM | Sat, 03 December 2005

Wonderful work hun and I am so glad you are over her at last.

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SusiQ

3:30AM | Mon, 05 December 2005

It is easy to say the words and to make the decision mentally, but to actually let go with your heart is a totally different matter. I would say this is a major step in recovering but don't be disappointed when you find out it is not the final one. Wait until you see her with another man and you don't feel the hurt, then you are over her. Great writing. Hugs to you for strength.

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FireTemptress

2:11PM | Mon, 05 December 2005

I love this writing..... it really hit home today. I hope that I get to the place where I reach the conclusion of your poem. I seem to keep dragging myself back to the first. Great work, thank you so much for posting.


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