Part 3 - Dragon Lord by luckyred
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"THURGON!!!" the Dragon Lord bellowed, "I told you she is not to be harmed, you imbecile you could have broken her neck!" The Dragon Lord trembled with anger as he grabbed Thurgon by the throat. "If you ever do that again I will snap YOUR neck like a brittle twig!" he growled letting Thurgon drop gasping to the ground. "Where is the package? Is it SAFE? WHERE is the package?"
Thurgon rose slowly rubbing his neck, "It is with Brummon and safe, I told him if he let anything happen to it I would kill him"
The Dragon Lord turned toward Thurgon, "That is good for if it is not, it will be your life too."
Randoff had heard enough it was time to leave before he was discovered. What was the Dragon Lord doing in this part of the country? Who was the girl? What was in the package? So many questions.... but now that was not the most dire thing, right now it was how to save the girl and with the least cost to his men. But for now he needed to return to his men and talk to Michael his Lieutenant. Michael had been his Lieutenant and friend for many years and whenever he could no longer see an answer to a problem, Michael would spew some annoying common sense toward him and get him back on track. Randoff pointed his horse back toward the path he left the men on, "Come Brutus", and the dog quickly trotted along beside the horse. (to be continued) |
Comments (26)
Beniu
Outstanding work!!! Love the characters and perfect lights!! Great story!!! V!
awadissk
Excellent work very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vremont
particularly amazing work on the dragon lord character, lighting on the armor and face are excellent
adm5050
Now that is a couple pretty cool creatures there!!
SophiaDeer
This is superb!! It looks so real...like right out of a movie. Wonderfully done.
brycek
Magnificent Susan..wonderful story and characters!!
prog
Wonderful work on the story and the image!!! Excellent image-it looks like a cool series!!
angelbearzs
wonderful work and excelllent:)
BBarbs
Well, it is official. Time to turn this series into a book. Well written and fantastically illustrated. I know you think I am joking but I really am not. I think it would be great for an illustrated novel...for what age I am not sure. lol. EXCELLENT WORK !!!!! HUGSSSSSSSS
squeeka
Susan, this is turning into one incredible and fantastic story and I agree with BBarbs! Should turn this into a book :) Awesome sweetie!! huge hugglz :)
twingo
another amazing scene, this is becomming a great story.
Christel
Your use of characters is awesome!! I love their textures and poses. Superb lightning sweetie!!! And i LOVE the story!! Cant wait to the next one ;o) V and hugs C
micsteel
Ouch, that dragon lord looks nasty! I'd rather spit in an ogre's face than be seen by the dragon lord! (shiver!) Um, I thought the package was with Brummon? Is he there, too?
dayna2
Bravo Fantastic keep going Excellent story (((Hugs))) Dayna xxoo
webdancer
What a tough cookie! Excellent story and scene!
gillbrooks
Fabulous !! The scene and the story !!!! The expression on the Dragon Lord's face kind of reminds me of the smug look Avon used to have in Blakes 7 ;-)
drifterlee
Awesome fantasy and story!
justinwilliams
Might be worth some time to turn it into a book Susan? You know there are a lot of people here willing to help you with anything.
capelito
Awesome story and great fantasy image.
Tamela.J.
Love the clarity in this!! Outstanding
Mea
Nicely posed, great design on the dragon lord. A couple of rough spots in the text, but nothing a little editing can't fix.
Frisbee761
Cool - something to read while this SLUG of a PC loads the picture....
crypticghost
I had forgotten what an excellent artist you are. This just is awsome Red! Excellent characters, pose, lighting, and final render. I am guessing the background is a photo, with some painting, either way, excellent incorporation.
Shardz
Oh man, everyone is getting into the act here as the plot thickens into a real conundrum for good old Randall! It seems there's a chain of command and everyone must answer to someone, although the orcs are fairly lowly creatures and can barely follow through with anything properly! The characters look amazing in this piece and blend seemlessly into the marvelous background! A very nice DOF effect really makes them stand out! Randall had better gather his best archers and mages for this one as I can see a nast altercation on the horizon! Excellent work!
romanceworks
That Dragon Lord is one powerful dude! Another superb action scene and I'm quite intrigued with the storyline ... hummmm, what's the package? Gotta read on.....:o) CC
Othosmops
Agree with romanceworks. If I were the Orc, I'd turn the Dragon Lord to fricassee...