Part 4 - Alania by luckyred
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| The Dragon Lord turned toward Thurgon, "Go find Brummon and bring me the package. Oh, before you go searching for Brummon remove the girls collar and let her rest, as long as it takes you to accomplish a task her bruises could be healed", he added with a sarcastic smirk.
Thurgon bent and fumbled with the lock on the girls collar, he was very tempted to jerk the chain in his anger but thought better of it.
After Thurgon left to search for Brummon the Dragon Lord slowly walked toward the girl, "I must apologize for the mishandling Alania, these Orcs are rather crude and dimwitted. Once we arrive at our destination I guarantee you will enjoy the utmost hospitality.
" Alania snapped her head up ignoring the sharp pain the motion caused her neck, "YOU FOUL MURDERER!" I want nothing from you but my release! If you release me now I promise your death with be swift, but I swear I WILL kill you!!!" "My, my, such strong words from one so powerless," chuckled the Dragon Lord. "If I were you I think I would be more concerned with staying alive." The Dragon Lord began to walk away but stopped and turned his head toward Alania, "You know dear, if you decided to make this easier on yourself and work with me I could make it WELL worth your efforts." He twisted his mouth into something not unlike a smile but none the less would have frightened a child into hiding. |
Comments (26)
Christel
OMG!! If you are writing this you have such an amazing tallent in writing!! This could be a book Red!! And all the images so far is perfect!!! This is beaond excellent aweetie!!! BIG hugs C
thefixer
Cool story Susan, I did the miss the others but with the site like it is I 'aint looking tonight! lol!
dayna2
I love it fantastic and a vote Bravo Susan (((Hugs))) Dayna xxoo keep the coming they are wonderful hun!!
awadissk
Excellent image very well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Beniu
Great work! Characters are superb! Lovely colours!
squeeka
Susan, I really do love this story!! It has everything a good fantasy should and I love the way you're illustrating it!! Beautiful work hon, keep em coming!! huge hugglz :)
prog
Fantastic!!!! Your story is wonderful and so are these images!!! The colors are so rich-a very impressive job of blending the render with the background!!!! EXCELLENT!
webdancer
Fantastic is right!!!! Excellent and the story line is wonderful!
gillbrooks
Loving the story. She looks like she has the blood of Celts running through her veins :)
micsteel
Great story! You're popping these out faster than I can look at them! Have there been 4? I think I must have missed one... She really looks troubled, here, and the brutes behind her truly look the part!
brycek
Susan..this is such a fantastic story. Excellent indeed!!
Mea
Nice use of the scene and background characters. The face on Alania is extremely well done. I think I see even a hint of tears in there (though it may be a trick of the light, it's good though) Story is progressing nicely, though again, I think the narative could use a little tweaking: there are redundancies that could be smoothed out for a better flow. I really look forward to see how this progresses.
Richabri
Great characters and a wonderful story :)
Syrup
An excellent composition,with a perfect background image.Mea has a point,please reread your words on this page.There are a couple of things that need correcting.When you done that you'll have a very slick looking page in your story.I'm no Engrish teacher chuckle but spelling and grammar can make or break a story.I still make mistakes all the time and I don't want you copying me! lol :B eaver !
Krid
great fantasy scene and characters with excellent poses and a very clear render
capelito
Great fantasy scene. Excellent story and work!
SophiaDeer
This is fantastic! So clear and beautiful!
BBarbs
Something about that last line just leaves me hanging. lol. Well, I think you could be a writer no matter what you think. LOL !!!! What is it they say ? Reach for the stars ? Excellent image and writing on this episode of your, um, forthcoming novel. he he. Superb work friend. HUGSSS
amanda_a42
Excellent fantasy scene, wonderful textures and expressions!
Tamela.J.
WOW Simply breathtaking!! Outstanding art & story!!
twingo
Very realistic skin on the girl, excellent poses on the orcs.
crypticghost
WOW, most excellent render. I love the characters, and the expressions, lighting, everything. =) makes me smile to see such effort.
Shardz
Ahh yes, isn't that always how it goes? The lust for power and the greed which drives the evil forces to try and foil the humans at their own game. I wouldn't be the least surprised if Alania took that staff and bonked the Dragon Lord over the head with it just for laughs! There's going to be some serious magic flinging going on here, but in which direction remains to be seen! Outstanding work on the characters and their realism within this remarkable forest scene! The clarity and detail is just fantastic! Excellent work!
angells
Fantastic scene, and wonderful story . Excellent work.
romanceworks
Oh, I like Alania - she's has a strength to match her beauty and makes a super heroine. Those Orcs look fantastic, too. Am so enjoying this story which has now intrigued me with the lecherous Dragon Lord, who is stroking that staff in the most phalic way.:o) Hope Alania kicks his murdering ass. Great story and visuals. You are having some fun with this graphic novel ... and so am I. :o) CC
Othosmops
Ah, a wizard, killing the High Sorceress! I hope he will die by the magic he's about to unlesh. Beautiful red hair her daughter has!