For Angelina Jolie and Brad Pritt by SusiQ

Writers • People • posted on Feb 28, 2006

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She softly touches his warm firm skin And waits for arms to circle in. The sense of home is what she craves The belonging that flows across waves. Her heart beats softly deep within a flutter, a gentle loop and spin Pale flesh heats and dews with love aspiring to reach the heights above His fingers thread through her long black tresses Tilts her head as her lips he blesses A loving kiss between two lovers No longer kept beneath the covers His babe she carries in loving care Enfolded, loved, his living heir This child is blessed right from the start With parents who love with all their heart. Though regret may fill their world From love to hate, emotions swirled Together they must stand as one Side by side with all that's done. ***************** I was battling with a decent ending. Suggestions are welcome.

Comments (7)

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PeeWee05

5:00AM | Tue, 28 February 2006

The best ending would be a break up coz that's all that happens in celeb marraiges

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busi2ness

6:29AM | Tue, 28 February 2006

Sad but true, Vera! I can not do any better ending, so let me just enjoy what you have created here in terms of strong emotions and true life!

raoullefere

8:07AM | Tue, 28 February 2006

But then another project starts// Each busied now within their 'art'// Till all too soon the pairing's done// And child is left with parent one// Not decent, perhaps, but probably accurate

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qu1j0t3

4:37PM | Sat, 04 March 2006

The best ending would be "Delete".

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SusiQ

12:02AM | Mon, 06 March 2006

Ha ha ha ha. I didn't think that by mentioning their names would cause so much antagonism. My work is done. I have caused a reaction.

spinner

10:03AM | Mon, 06 March 2006

Yes, and what a magnificent reaction you caused. ~s

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LillianaSapphire

2:30AM | Wed, 26 April 2006

alternate ending suggestion : This union just a whirlwind of lust // Mixed up feelings// hurt and mistrust// The child grows up as number one, no mommy or daddy as it should have begun..... Take Care Anna