Please by vaggabondd

Writers • Romance • posted on Apr 25, 2006

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I see you standing there with him My whole body aches I

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rainbows

2:44PM | Tue, 25 April 2006

Beautiful!!! A little lass in North Yorkshire. UK Hears these words, excellent.

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SusiQ

2:03AM | Wed, 26 April 2006

The trials of love are painful. If it was meant to be, he'll be back. You need to ask yourself though - do you really want him back knowing his weakness for others? Lovely emotive work.

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Margana

5:18PM | Thu, 27 April 2006

This is wonderful.I really love the honesty.I find especially great these two lines..."When I was awake you were my dream When I was asleep you were my peace."The only thing that jumps out at me is the word 'bump'.It isn't a very attractive sounding word when describing someone's body.Just my two cents.Hope you don't mind,because I really think this is great.-M :^)