Her tan line by vaggabondd
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Description
I saw her walking the beach
Golden brown tan
A modest two piece bikini
If there is such a thing
Covered her just enough
To drive you crazy
Without seeming easy
I mustered up the courage to start talking to her
She is very funny
And bright
She knew so much about so much
She liked sports and politics
She was perfect
All night long
Tossing and turning
I could not sleep
As bright as she was
And all the fun that we had
The only thing on my mind
Was her tan line
Comments (5)
Margana
I like your easy-going style.Well written and concludes tightly.
mystmaiden
I like this, it reads well and it has an honesty about it that is most refreshing.
SusiQ
Ha ha ha ha. Great honest poem about first impressions.. ;o)
Zeldie
LOL Typical male huh?!? Lovely poem!
myrrhluz
Well my friend, consider my eyes rolled in a feminine fashion. Great lead in to the punch line! Very well (and very male) said!