Cry For Help by luckyred

Poser • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on May 12, 2006

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Cry For Help

I stand behind my prison gates
denied...., ignored...., forgotten.
With time I slowly fade away,
my valued lessons wasted.

I've called to you before for help,
my cries are still unanswered.
Is it you can't hear me call
or that you can not face me?

I represent so many things,
an ageless forest trodden...,
a hungry nation weeping...,
displays of ignorant hatred.

Is your life so busy that
the meaning slipped away?
Are your eyes so blinded
that you can no longer see?

Life is for a reason
filled with lessons we should learn.
To take a step to change things could ....,
but alas.....

Life gets lost in daily tasks
and striving for so little.
And treasure troves will never be
as full as some would like it.

My "right to be" depends upon
the actions that you take.
To turn from me will never change
what still could come to pass.

And while you strive for little things,
that still will leave you empty.
I wait within my dangerous realm,
I mourn...., I hope...., I sit......

~luckyred~

Comments (26)

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PoserHobbit

11:27AM | Fri, 12 May 2006

Wow, your back with a vengence!! Excellent work!!

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papachile

11:33AM | Fri, 12 May 2006

Fnatastic...Very poetic...the words strike a cord big time...excellent work on that image...it is really well done from the fence to the wire!

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Styxx

11:35AM | Fri, 12 May 2006

This gave me chills!

dayna2

12:38PM | Fri, 12 May 2006

Bravo Fantastic!!

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Christel

12:45PM | Fri, 12 May 2006

OMG!!! this is so so touching and so so sad.. You really did a masterpiece this time Red!! Your words went straigt to my hart.. Just amazing work hun..

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micsteel

12:57PM | Fri, 12 May 2006

This covers so much territory, from the homeless, to abandoned pets, to war victims, to domestic violence, to me not answering your e-mail, to starving kids in India...I could go on, but I'm sure you've had enough! :) Education is the only thing that can effectively change society, and as long as the masses struggle to survive and the rich struggle to "earn" money from the masses, this will be relevant.

Tamela.J.

1:18PM | Fri, 12 May 2006

This is pure sadness but it fantasticly done. Outstanding

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brycek

1:28PM | Fri, 12 May 2006

This brings a tear everytime I view..Outstanding work Susan!!

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awadissk

2:02PM | Fri, 12 May 2006

Very well done, excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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meselfr

3:36PM | Fri, 12 May 2006

wow... excellent piece of work.. :)

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gillbrooks

4:02PM | Fri, 12 May 2006

Amazing work - absolutely brill !

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prog

6:08PM | Fri, 12 May 2006

This is really stunning render quality, and such an expressive image!!! Absolutely wonderful work! EXCELLENT!

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SophiaDeer

9:35PM | Fri, 12 May 2006

Powerful image! Very well done.

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Beniu

4:31AM | Sat, 13 May 2006

OMG! Really great one! Mood is terrific! So sad render but Thanks!

UweMattern

8:42AM | Sat, 13 May 2006

WOW the atmosphere is very intense! Most fantastic work! ~Uwe

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romanceworks

8:58AM | Sat, 13 May 2006

Wow - powerful artwork and poem! Amazing. V. :o) CC

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Anain

9:35AM | Sat, 13 May 2006

Woowwwww, impressive!!! Love her atmosphere. Excellent and vote. Hugs. Ana.

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capelito

11:58AM | Sat, 13 May 2006

Fantastic and impressive image. Excellent work!

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amanda_a42

4:33PM | Sat, 13 May 2006

A most powerful and dramatic image! well done!

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angells

3:16AM | Sun, 14 May 2006

Wow, a very intense and atmospheric image. This is really impressive, and your poetry that goes with it is outstanding and so true.

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squeeka

7:25PM | Sun, 14 May 2006

Wow Susan!! Intense image and words!! What an atmosphere that fits perfectly with your words. Bravo sweetie!! huge hugglz :)

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webdancer

9:48AM | Wed, 17 May 2006

What a powerful scene! Excellent work!

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VoidDweller

5:36PM | Wed, 17 May 2006

What a heart-rending piece of art. Very nice work.

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Rhonda

12:01PM | Thu, 18 May 2006

What an awesome render and your poem is fantastic!!! Very touching piece! ~Hugs~

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twingo

4:03AM | Sat, 20 May 2006

Well Susan, this one left me speechless for a while, what a sad and powerfull scene. The expression on her face and the POV could not have been better. The poem is really excellent.

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