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Writers Alternative posted on May 19, 2006
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I stand before you Naked Aware only that you scrutinize my soul my inner being You see the deeper me The person I try to hide Within a wall of deception Will you be kind And leave a word or two of encouragement Uplifting Or will you grind me to dust. I stand before you Naked stripped of defenses awaiting your reply.

Comments (8)


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busi2ness

2:16AM | Fri, 19 May 2006

You certainly have a way with words, even for us illiterates not knowing much about poetry!

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STEVIEUKWONDER

3:37AM | Fri, 19 May 2006

Beautiful work Sue. Steve :o)

LeapingWolf

4:25AM | Fri, 19 May 2006

I stand before you but cannot critize, for I see the worth within your eyes. Bravo, exquisite words.

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SusiQ

4:43AM | Fri, 19 May 2006

Thank you so much for your support all. Huge hugs!

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RGUS

5:22AM | Fri, 19 May 2006

Very cool Sue... naked or not... I judge... fairly interesting...and if you get a vote or comment from me then it worked...LOL... Love ya sweets...xxx (V)

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MrBenShaman

9:49AM | Fri, 19 May 2006

Keep going.

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PeeWee05

6:24AM | Mon, 29 May 2006

Very literal for me, like a woman awaiting her next beating...

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nikolais

12:53AM | Tue, 30 May 2006

touchy and deep


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