Clinging to the edge. by SusiQ
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This little description was inspired by PeeWee's photo today!
http://www.renderosity.com/mod/gallery/index.php?image_id=1276798
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Clinging to the edge I paused, waited. Wanting more yet afraid of the end.
Behind me came a little push, a slight urging from the part of me that was catching up. A
ripple shivered through me. I moved closer to the edge. Closer to falling to my doom.
I though of where I might end up. Crashing into the heaps of metal below me, or landing
into the soft cushion of water.
I slithered lower, closer, hanging over the edge now. I knew if I looked back I would lose
my balance and fall.
Another nudge senting me screaming silently downwards. I twisted and turned and
conformed to the shape nature intended. A bright white light flashed across my body,
through it.
I was lucky. My fall was softened by the water below. I rejoiced as I landed and sent
ripples of message to all around.
I was here.
I had arrived.
I was one with the bowl of water.
Comments (8)
Zeldie
When God leads you to the edge of the cliff, trust Him fully. Only one of two things will happen - either He will catch you when you fall or He will teach you how to fly... In my life, out of experience, I will go only with this thought. Excellent piece of writing Sue!
STEVIEUKWONDER
After looking at those impressive pictures Sue, your words fit exactly. Excellent! Good to see you posting again. Steve :o)
SusiQ
Thank you both. I have been working so hard on my business that I forget the words are still there and waiting to be said. Sorry it's taken so long to remember. Hugs all!
Mondwin
Superbly picture and splendid write!!!!Bravissima!V:DDD.Hugsxx
PeeWee05
Glad I inspired you... Glad oyu found the time to post... And excellent discription of the drop's feeligns.
DennisReed
Exquisite piece, and perfectly formed for PeeWee's photo! Bravo!
busi2ness
It's been long over due I'd say, LOL! Very flattering text for Vera's work.
TallPockets
"All work and no play makes SusiQ .... wink). GLAD to see ya' back! Reminds me of what a 'writer' sounds like!! My best to you and yours, kind soul. T.P.