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Eyes lined with pain lips taunt with determination a hollow laugh echoes
Fidgeting with anxiety and indecision minutes falling away to nothingness
A light you close your eyes refusing to see hope
Silence heart thundering wildly waiting for the phone to ring

Comments (5)


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meico

4:49AM | Mon, 18 September 2006

A question: in line 2 is 'taunt' a typo for taut ... or a deliberate play on words? Overall this is a carefully worded journey through the tension of anticipation. Excellent!

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cagewench

12:29AM | Tue, 19 September 2006

Good catch, yes it was deliberate. :)

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TallPockets

1:21AM | Wed, 20 September 2006

Miss Cara Mae: Hello, young lady. GLAD to see your brilliance once again! Now, I'm humming, "Anticipation" by Carly Simon. WINK. My best to you and your son, kind soul. TallPockets/brian.

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Shabetei

6:29PM | Thu, 21 September 2006

I find this very interesting to read. It's full of feeling to me, not an emotion, but actual sensation when I read it.

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cagewench

6:48AM | Tue, 26 September 2006

Thank you all :) I can't go into details as to what prompted this outpouring... but I needed to release it.


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