What is - is by NothingNess

Writers • Abstract • posted on Oct 21, 2006

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There are days I wish I cared less What is - is I�ve got to walk Down this road No right No wrong It just is This my path Young And impetuous I still need to learn This much I know The flame is Beyond my grasp What is - is Me here You there I cannot care less This has to be I'm walking And gathering Ingredients For the cosmic stew Years measured In pain An ounce of Beatitude Every shed tear All the joys Bring me Closer to my truth

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Comments (5)

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Storm9167

4:30AM | Sat, 21 October 2006

Beautiful poem, and words I can relate too.. Except for the young and impetuous part, lol..

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meico

1:44PM | Sat, 21 October 2006

The brief choppy lines emphasise the pain here ... though the tone is by no means angsty or self-pitying. It is a nicely balanced encapsulation of your emotional turmoil. Good stuff! Mike

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TallPockets

6:40AM | Tue, 24 October 2006

Superb writing!!

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Margana

2:21PM | Sun, 29 October 2006

Like Storm,I am not young either,but I can still claim a bit of impetuousness,lol.I can relate to your words,as well...You have a flair for getting right to the point of what you want to express.The choppy style,as stated by meico,works perfectly here.Very well done,Leah.-M :^)

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