Seven Days Part II by NothingNess
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Seven days ago
I held you in my arms
You couldn
Comments (7)
meico
So sad ... the structure of your poem has the clever and appropriate appearance of a trackway of tears sliding slowly down your cheek. Yes, sad - but lovely too. Mike
TallPockets
Superbly written work!
mamabobbijo
Very sad and wistful, but lovely none the less. Thanks for sharing. BJ
DennisReed
So well expressed! So sad, but I think someone willing to give that much love, will love again
PhrankPower
I'm sure he does, if he has seen the real you.
Margana
Sigh...been there myself.I can't envy your pain but I can say that the old saying is true.It is better to have loved and lost,than never to have loved at all.Bittersweet is probably the best way to describe it...Anyway,wonderfully done,Leah.Gut-wrenchingly honest,and the 'choppy' style once again accents the aching rawness of your emotions most effectively.
busi2ness
I think this is a wonderful (but painful) sequel to the first "Seven days" poem. I could even sense the shallow breathing in your style.