WIP/sleeve by RayTraz
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Description
A friend of mine asked me to do his demotape sleeve. I came up with this and I want it to be better. Please give some suggestions. Thank you.
Comments (7)
mattomicx
looks pretty perfect the way it is
Supafly
i agree with mattomicx, but maybe give some of those HUGE headphones?
akrilico
It works very well
Usurer
cool name "MEGA". I like your colorwork and good pshop efxs too
Black
Actually the wrist looks a bit disturbed here. The whole is great.. the headphones could be an idea.. But more in a 3D wireframe form or you could just put a lazer glow or sort of going through her ears (Sorayama style). Another thing I would offer is to bring her down abit more as to center her left cheek. and make some space to play around with some ideas for the finger tips(again a glow or bolt.. or a 3D wireframe) Gosh i talk too much don't I?
allengraph
Very nice image!you have a very lucky friend =-) I'd love to give a suggestion...I'm not sure what kinda look your going for... maybe have the wrist bend a little less or tapper it...have her spining a CD on her finger...I'd change the back to a darker color...maybe toss in a computer board back drop...if it was me I'd make he a zombie LOL! but I don't think your going that way...I like the wire frame idea too...cool image good luck =-)
RealityCheck
Apart from the wrist that was commented above it is well done. I'd try to improve the pixelation effect behind the main title at the front jacket. BTW, is it raining very hard over there? Major floods anywhere?