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ESTRANGERS

Writers People posted on Feb 08, 2007
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Written some years ago. Revised and re-posted. Signs that a relationship is disintegrating are often not dramatic ... indeed sometimes they are so gradual that they are hardly noticeable. Therein, of course, lies the danger.... ESTRANGERS Why do we never now commiserate with comedies, forgive and fete our foolishness, lace our clumsy-calls with love? Why do we never now absently lay a languid hand along a liquid inner thigh: a below the table-top token of post-prandial promise? Why do we never now play This Little Piggy with gentle teeth and gentler tongue on the lingering long erotic route home? Why do we now allow a careless chasm to creep twixt curled hands when walking [not quite] side by side? Why do we do what inconsequential things we do when together is a mere coincidence of place? Why do we, despite these lonely loveless things, never think "Why we?"

Comments (16)


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RodolfoCiminelli

5:37AM | Thu, 08 February 2007

Fantastic integral work and wonderful image my friend.....!!!

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waldomac

12:45PM | Thu, 08 February 2007

Love this work, picture and poem. Mood is established right off the bat with the image, and the poem is the perfect wrap-up. Very nice.

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helanker

1:45PM | Thu, 08 February 2007

Such a beautiful Poem and such a beautiful Image too.

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A_Sunbeam

2:35PM | Thu, 08 February 2007

Like the textures - and the lettering: you have a way with typography!

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sadlers5

5:27PM | Thu, 08 February 2007

very thought provoking for sure........

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NekhbetSun

5:35PM | Thu, 08 February 2007

Hmmmm thought provoking and, of course, poignant, but isn't that the way of most long term relationships anyway (rhetorical) ....sad, I suppose, but that's just the way it usually goes...and I know there'll be naysayers and I'll be called a cynic, but unfortunately, that's just human nature...can ya tell I don't think humans were meant to be monogamous :o) So, on that uplifting note, I'll close by saying most excellent mon ami... ~ Hugs ~

Valerie-Ducom

5:45PM | Thu, 08 February 2007

As always, a pleasure for my eyes and my head... Merci mon ami et bonne journ :)

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D.C.Monteny

7:23PM | Thu, 08 February 2007

Such great observation of the human spirit. Thanks for re-posting this, i truly enjoyed it!

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kansas

9:39PM | Thu, 08 February 2007

Ahh yes! Been there once. So sad.

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romanceworks

12:33AM | Fri, 09 February 2007

After thirty years together LJ and I always knew and embraced 'we.' It is a poignant work, in image and words. CC

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miashadows

7:03PM | Fri, 09 February 2007

"Why do we,despite these lonely loveless things never think"Well I have no words...exellent work

kaliwright

3:21AM | Sat, 10 February 2007

fantatsic work>>great sentiment and it's definately showing and sharing the little things with our significant others that remind us of how to love ....

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amirapsp

3:49PM | Mon, 12 February 2007

Natural Talent here...

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mamabobbijo

3:53PM | Tue, 13 February 2007

Well written, touching that place in all of us who have been there. Belying the phrase, " je ne regrettes riens". I would change so much. BJ

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Bothellite

2:57PM | Sun, 25 February 2007

I dropped in and got drawn in. At first it was third person to me and then it got personal. And then it made sense and then it got p-e-r-s-o-n-a-l. I'm working on that. Thanks. I needed that.

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leanndra

6:41PM | Tue, 08 April 2008

One must always be on guard to prevent this. I think this happens with most long-term relationships, (marriage included). I think it starts to fall apart when we take the other person for granted and it is a down-hill spiral from there.


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