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Cruisin'

Bryce Science Fiction posted on Feb 08, 2007
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Bryce beginner, goofing around with lighting, perspective, and shiny things. Making a post so one day when I learn how to work this program, and can smile at my initial rudimentary attempts. Tips welcomed. :)

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Riquelme8

4:56PM | Thu, 08 February 2007

Welcome here!! I think you have overall quite nice scene here... maybe the colors are for my personal taste little boring but I like the perspective and the moon! What comes to tips I would say you should read as many tutorials as possible and try to learn some new techniques. At least that way I've done some progress within a year:) Just keep on practising:)

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SavantNoir

5:46PM | Thu, 08 February 2007

Yeah, a bit boring to be sure. Wasn't sure to go for the 'helicopter skiing in British Columbia' look, or moon hopping cruise in some distant galaxy. I only had enough talent for the latter! lol

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Biffowitz

7:02PM | Thu, 08 February 2007

Looking for tutorials is a good idea and great start. I see a few things that may improve this image! It doesn't look boring, it looks static, and that's maybe bad news for a streamlined spaceship. The composition is all wrong too, you look at the spaceship and your eye is led to the outside of the image. I would recomend moving the ship over to the right, so when your eye is led along the spaceship you're into the centre of the image and not the edge. Maybe that planet is too small and in the wrong place too huh? If it was way bigger and infront of the space ship, your eye would be led along the ship to the planet. Maybe the planet has interesting craters and textures to it. I tell you what I think would look really good, a planet so big a part of it covers 2/3 of the background and the spaceship is cruising by. Maybe a bit of a blur to give it a sense of movement, or flares on the engines. Yeah, welcome to R'osity btw.

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SavantNoir

8:06PM | Thu, 08 February 2007

I appreciate all the advice. I understand totally what you mean "Newbie"; going for the drama. I purposely went for the understated and simple look in this post. I did another one along the lines you suggested, with a big "Saturn" taking up 1/3 of the composition. My immediate goals are not yet focused on composition, so much as they are just learning how to make a terrain, work with Skies, and create some lighting. Then I will attempt more complexity. Going layer at a time. :) Thanks!

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Sexything

9:54PM | Thu, 08 February 2007

Looks great to me!!! I love the colours I don't find them BORING! but for someone who just started with the program, your doing great much better than me!! lol I hope I get to post something soon, when I figuer out how to work the texture, but I love it. keep it up and in no time you will have an awesome images.

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wawadave

12:25AM | Fri, 09 February 2007

nice newby render lots of tuts and free d/ls in this link http://forum.daz3d.com/viewtopic.php?t=43591

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CrimsonDesire

6:28AM | Sat, 10 February 2007

Nicely done ^^

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gattone_blu

12:06PM | Thu, 15 February 2007

Excellent

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KellieInCali

1:44PM | Sat, 03 March 2007

I like this. The colors look good on my screen. I like most of the composition but the moon competes with the spaceship and pulls you away from looking at the spaceship. I dont agree that you have the spaceship in the wrong place. If you ignore the moon and look at the ship only, as you look into the picture your eye travels along the length of the craft and then continues to move in the direction that the ship is heading. It is not wrong for your eye to be directed. It is only wrong when your eye is distracted. The only 2 things I think are wrong are the spaceship does not looks like its moving and your cloud shadow suggests the main light source is coming from an angle that competes with the way the moon is shadowed. Good job of balancing and proportion though. Nice picture!


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