The Final Scene by Anasta
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OK this is a take-off of the image I uploaded earlier. It actually started out as my desktop background on my laptop hence the sidebar quality to it. Thought it looked good in Black & White so I knocked on the creative side of my brain for a bit and this is what I came up with. ENJOY!
Please comment! :D
Comments (6)
fredsmith
I like the straight up black and white composition. As you indicate it is a mood piece and a good one.
RubyT
I too am partial to the b/w, very elegant and catching!
altec101
Impressive!
AnAardvark
Critical Ring comment -- I like the composition, and think this is very good. Have you tried left justifying the text? It might look better that way. If you can render it with a larger resolution, the text might be clearer. Also, I think that the skirt is perhaps a little too light, it draws ones attention more than the rest of the figure. Overall though, very impressive.
kalon
I like this much better in black and white. It lends an air of mystery that compliments the poem. Perhaps, you might crop the excess background from the left to bring the woman more into focus, or stagger the paragraphs in a stairstep fashion to deliver the eye to the figure. Between the poem and the image, it makes you wonder. Very creative.
deci6el
Kerning The one thing that draws my attention away from just experiencing the art is the kerning. Maybe you've done this on purpose, to create a certain effect. The way the letters in each word start to separate and then jam together could be seen as adding to the dreamy quality. I'll suggest that if you are going for that then to do it even more on purpose. If not, for others (for me) it just makes it a little harder to read with large gaps between some letters and no air in between others.