The Last Time by ClawShrimp
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Description
Finally took the shrink-wrap off Miki 2.
Not bad for a base Asian female, but really not flexible enough for what I wanted her for. I think I'll stick with V4 for the time being.
Custom Face Room face. Not great I'll admit, and only half way to what I envisioned.
Comments and crits always welcomed.
Comments (23)
RoseMoxon
really good pose, love the soft focus
Denys234
Awesome!
FrankT
bit of a change from Apollo :) I'm still not sure about her either. I've done a few tests with her but we'll see
ClawShrimp
I'm still plugging away at Apollo projects, but took a couple hours break from 'him' and did this. :) I forgot to mention this is G2 Jessi hair and the gun is from the Spy pack. I had to fake the depth of field in Photoshop because I didn't feel like waiting six hours for this render to finish! ;)
telber
brilliant, take the yellow out in ps should be perfect
netlion66
Excellent work!! very cool
Rutra
Very good. I like her face, pose and expression. The only thing I dont like very much is the DOF. It seems more a motion blur than a DOF, IMVHO.
ClawShrimp
The combination of yellows and greens in this image was very deliberate, but may not be to everyone's tastes. Having said that I'll tinker with this again and see how it looks with the yellows toned down. It won't warrent a re-post, but if I prefer the adjustments I'll save that version as my 'final'. Cheers
ClawShrimp
Rutra, It was intended to be a little of both - Motion and depth. I don't particularly like the results either :).
Bea
What a difference from you Apollo work :) :) - well done the only comment I would make is that the neck looks a little strange with those what I assume are hair strands?
ClawShrimp
The hair strand on the left looks to be coming from nowhere. I hadn't noticed that. This should have been fixed in post-work (another addition to my to-do list). Thanks Bea.
Anniebel
Great POV, no crit from me, all issues mentioned I think.
thecytron
Interesting style of composition!
atilla39
All issues have been said. No crits here
ArtPearl
I like her - very nice face and expression. Shouldnt she be looking in the diresction she's pointing her gun? (Or pointing the gun in the direction she's looking?
SoCalRoberta
I like the way the blurring of the gun and hand give this a sense of motion, as if you snapped the shot while she was swinging around to aim. I think her eyes have already seen what she's going for and the hand is following that. Great image :)
TheAnimaGemini
Great pose and expression. But i have to agree whit DOF. Looked more blurry than DOF.
KarenJ
Excellent use of DOF. I love her expression, it really says she's ready to kick someone's arse! Her nostrils are a bit glowing though :-)
Acadia
I like the pose and perspective (gun out front and blurred). The skin tone while deliberate is not to my liking, but that's just personal preference and neither her nor there.
ClawShrimp
Thankfully I always save the raw renders, so I can go back and re-do post photoshoping that doesn't work. I've toned down the yellowing of the image, but kept the greenish hue, which I personally think makes this image. I've lessened the movement in order to reduce confliction with the depth of field. * I've also fixed the hair clipping issues. I won't bother re-posting as the changes are relativley minor. Just wanted to say thank you to everyone for their help.
pjz99
I have little to complain about with this one, you did a very good job removing the Miki-ness from her face and making her look unique. Very cool, good motion blur.
artistheat
Excellent Image and Blur Effect,Splendid Work
Jydekris
Reminds me of HEAVY RAIN's demo. cool