.: The Sicilian Sparrow :. Part III by Rainbowgirl

Poser • Story/Sequential • posted on Jun 24, 2007

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'It's a somewhat delicate business, Ms. Baton...' 'It always is, Ms. Vavoom.' She was not nervous or frightened as many people are that talk to a detective. She was, it's hard to say what she was, she was reluctant, and eager.Perhaps she was frightened in the end. And she definetely was not able to tell her story logically consistant. In the movies she had a script. That's easier. Moira got her a cup of coffee and I offered her a cigarette. She relaxed a bit and finally made it. She had got hate mail. 'I wouldn't think that too uncommon for a celebrity... you must be used to get not only fan mail' 'No, it isn't uncommon but this here is, well it is very personal, ya know.' tbc ***** It seems I have at least one thing in common with Ms. Vavoom. I feel quite unable to tell the story... it would be difficult enough to do it in German and having translated a friends website all day long I couldn't find the words for a dialogue... have I saddled myself with too heavy a burden? I do hope I haven't. Anyway, If you find a mistake, some nonsense I wrote - please tell me! If you have suggestions what a native speaker really would say - let me know! I would greatly appreciate it! ***** Thank you for having a look and thank you so much for the comments on the previous parts of the story! I love them all and mostly I love the helpful suggestions! Hugs, Doro

Comments (41)

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Gor111

3:08AM | Mon, 25 June 2007

Wonderful how you have posed and dressed your two fabulous looking and dicsussing ladies! Love the atmosphere here!!!

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PhilW

4:18AM | Mon, 25 June 2007

Great style to the picture and love all the little details, it makes it look real. And no problem with the story or your English - certainly better than my German!

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