Tropical Coast by Victoria_Lee

Work In Progress • Landscape • posted on Jun 29, 2007

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Description

This is a Vue 6 image using a procedural terrain and an altitude function to create the cliff. The ecosystem is a custom one I made just for this image. The water planes and textures are from the SeaScape pack by Monsoon over at 3D Commune. There's something missing here. I just can't put my finger on it. All suggestions and critiques are definitely welcome and appreciated. This is the link to the Art Theory Forum thread: http://www.renderosity.com/mod/forumpro/showthread.php?thread_id=2702923

Comments (13)

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Skyback

12:31PM | Fri, 29 June 2007

Remarkable work! 5+!!!!!!!!!!!!

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garybina

1:27PM | Fri, 29 June 2007

Very Nice picture, everything just seems to fit. Don't know that I would change anything

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thefixer

2:28PM | Fri, 29 June 2007

Nice job Victoria!!

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DramaKing

4:05PM | Fri, 29 June 2007

Maybe what you're missing is water turbulence. A few big waves and ocean spray might help. But I do see some patches of "churning water," which certainly helps. Oh, and is this with Vue Infinite? I remember that you had plans to get it.

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hazelfaye

4:08PM | Fri, 29 June 2007

I think its perfect, great job on it

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ozbrat

4:35PM | Fri, 29 June 2007

Beautiful Work

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originalkitten

4:54PM | Fri, 29 June 2007

This is so tranquil and beautiful

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TheAnimaGemini

12:55AM | Sat, 30 June 2007

Excellent work. Like it a lot. Very dreamy landscape.

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kalon

12:13PM | Sat, 30 June 2007

It's a beautiful landscape, but it's missing a focal point.

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Rutra

12:30PM | Sat, 30 June 2007

It's indeed beautiful but I agree with kalon about a missing focal point, something to look at first. One thing that striked me as strange is such big trees growing in such a vertical slope. But my first impression when I opened the image was confusion about the scale. I wasn't sure if I was looking at a big scene or a small one. Maybe there is some incoherence of scale between the various elements (trees, rocks and foam). I think the foam is not realistic (sorry, I know I keep saying this in your pictures...)

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samhal

10:00PM | Sat, 30 June 2007

This is wonderful! So peaceful and serene. Excellent! ~Samantha

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SamTherapy

6:30PM | Sun, 08 July 2007

The lack of a focal point doesn't bother me at all, since real live landscapes don't often have them. The scene is really beautiful on its own merits; the only thing I'm not too sure about is the density of the shadows. Quite a bit darker than I'd expect in a scene like this.

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