.: The Sicilian Sparrow :. Part VIII by Rainbowgirl

Poser • Story/Sequential • posted on Jul 18, 2007

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When I left my flat it was already dark and the fog was even a little more dense. Good luck I thought. I left my bike at the corner, lighted a last cigarette and when it was smoked I went to Lola's mansion. I must admit I was astonished when I saw it. It was no fancy villa at all but an old two storey clapbord house. Big but not fashionable. Slowly I entered the small park. No woman, no man, no car, no cat. Lola had told me about her alarm system and I thought it wouldn't be a problem. It wasn't. The sensors in my visor stayed calm. The alarm was off and that was the second surprise tonight. I ducked and ran to the house. On the veranda I stopped and checked sensors and surroundings carefully. No alarm system and no soul nearby. It took me fifteen seconds to open the back door lock and I cursed my slowness when I opened it, careful to avoid any noise. I couldnt be sure that there was someone in there but I was sure that Lola would have turned the alarm on. I saw a small hall and a stairway. Both were empty and I enterd the hall, closing the door behind me. My target was on the second floor. Lola's sparrow hang at her bedroom wall she had told me. The only noise I could hear was the ticking of an old fashioned clock in the hall. Gently I stepped on the stairway. The third step creaked. I stopped. Still no evidence of a human being. I breathed deeply and went on. tbc ***** Can't say how but I could complete my work (a stupid essay about William Turner) faster than I had imagined and found a little time for the Sparrow this afternoon. Just to shorten the time for those two or three people who like to know what's going on and especially for Ladonna *grin* I hope you like it and I say thank you for the comments on the least episode. The next one will not be online before Tuesday. I'll be out of town and out of internet between tomorrow afternoon and Monday night. Have a wonderful loving weekend and take care! Hugs, Doro

Comments (45)

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Granny_E

2:44PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

Oh, this is getting goood! Excellent image to go with the story.

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Janiss

2:48PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

Brilliant scene... I adore this dark atmosphere!

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sessan53

2:49PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

The story and your picture is amacing... Excellent work... Bravo 5+:-)

altec101

3:00PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

Awesome!!

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ChristineG

3:06PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

wow what a great render. your post work is amazing.. great light. Hugs C

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leehilliard

3:06PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

great work doro. luv the lighting.superb story too.

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huenersh

3:12PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

Hey William Turner was an great artist. I love his paintings...actually I never had to write an essay 'bout him ;-) Fantastic image, Doro. Some ALIAS feel to it, great!

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Petra-S

3:15PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

super light!

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MarciaGomes

3:17PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

EXCELENTE OBRA.+++++++++5

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Bossie_Boots

3:21PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

Superb image and story hugs lou x

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Dorie0924

3:23PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

Cool!

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Syltermermaid

3:51PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

Ich freue mich das Du Deine Story nicht aufgegeben hast!!!! Es ist immer wieder ein Erlebnis Deine Bilder dazu zu sehen und die Geschichte zu lesen!!! Du hast ein fantastisches Talent, Doro!!!! Du solltest es nutzen!!! Hugs Ute

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waldotim

4:14PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

wow... very dramatic lighting! top quality!!!

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Madbat

4:14PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

Superb moody image and great story so far!

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campbellsoup59

4:22PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

great!

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LudyMelltSekher

4:28PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

{@}>---Hello my dear friend, WOOOWWWW!!! She´s absolutely beautiful! Great work, excellent composition and story ! A million stars from my **** (Thanks you very much for comments) Happy day, Hug in Your heart. Luminous blesing. Ludy<---<---@

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brycek

5:14PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

WOW..Fantastic image and story. Nice work!!

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drifterlee

6:00PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

Wonderful lighting! Very moody!!

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Draco1960

6:07PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE!!!! It's the best yet...Great atmosphere

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Unicornst

6:29PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

Absolutely outstanding work here and the story just gets more tense as it goes.

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McAfee2000

7:13PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

very very nice postwork - bravo this is wonderful

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sixstring

7:31PM | Wed, 18 July 2007

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! You always manage to section it off so as to leave me wanting more. You're a great artist and a Fantastic writer!!!! You really should send this to a publisher when you're finished writing it. Big hugs, Doro!!! - Matt

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