.: The Sicilian Sparrow :. Part IX by Rainbowgirl
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It was easy to find Lola's bedroom upstairs. All doors where open except one. I opened it carfully. The room was dark. I switched the light of my visor on and looked around. The room was medium sized and to my anewed astonishment it was not glamorous at all. Two chests of drawers and a brass bed. An open door led to the adjacent dressing room and a spiral staircase led a gallery that was dimly lit by a single bulb. Presumably Lola left this light on day and night.
The only luxury of the room were lots of paintings. Most of them beautiful and probably valuable. One could have been a Picasso. I wasn't sure and I wasn't interested. I was here for the Sparrow.
Lots of paintings but not a single sparrow. Suddenly I catched a glimpse of something strange. Yes, it was empty space where a small picture had hang for a long time. Had Brunetti already been here and catched the bird? I took a second look but the empty space was still empty. I was wondering...
Abruptly I realised what has been only in my subconcious for a few minutes. There was a ripply noise coming from upstairs. Running water? And weren't there faint voices too..?
tbc
You may believe it or not - guess, you have to *grin* - that it took me 6 weeks to realise this stupid little sequel? Well, first I encountered a severe flaw in my story and didn't know how to fix it. Then, wasn't it essential that the Sparrow was gone? Yes, it was. Next I was looking for a fitting bedroom and couldn't find one so I finally had to make with what I have in my runtime. In between I had not the least inspiration how the image should look. I was sure about the next one but this here...
Ok, it's settled now, I'm full of ideas for the next parts and will be on it again more regularly. To all those two of you that have really waited for the sequel I apologize and send a lot of hugs!
*****
Thank you for looking! Sorry that the image is so (too?) dark but it's late at night inside a house ya know...
Comments (34)
Gor111
A fascinating work and story you have posted here! The indoor scene got a real fabulous light effect here! Wonderfully done!!!
dphoadley
Awwwwww....I was hoping for some more L. B. A's! But this is nice too. ;=D DO keep up the good work. DPH
Bossie_Boots
Fantastic scene its not to dark the lighting is perfect superb work hugs lou x
Dezlagrate
Well I gotta say, that's a nice start for the suspense to build.
PhilW
Good to see the Sparrow story back and a nice atmospheric scene!
OrphanedSoul
Nice story cool render!
meselfr
sweet.... excellent render... :)
PoserSecrets
Believe it or not: your painting on the wall hangs in my staircase! That's great! Love the lighting in this one, bit dark but great atmosphere! Love it! Arno
RodolfoCiminelli
Great work of lighting and excellent realization.....!!!!
Janiss
Such excellent story... and I adore this dark atmosphere... great work my friend!
mikeerson
I missed the first 8... I'll have to check into it later. Looks good
Petra-S
fantastic light!
brycek
Wonderful work..love the darkness in this. Nice work!!
LudyMelltSekher
{@}>---Hello my dear friend,Excellent work..wonderful scene..superb.. A million stars from my ****Thanks you very much for story Happy day, Hug in Your heart.Luminous blesing. Ludy<---<---@
RubyT
Eerie image well executed! This story rocks.
shadowking1957
Very sureal work sweetheart 10/10.........
jwiest
Nicely done Doro. Love how the wall was painted around where the painting used to hang.
sessan53
Your sparrowstory is excellent. Very great work:-)hugs sessan
Madbat
Great story so far! I like the detail in the image, the spot where the painting hung...nice.
Syltermermaid
Fantastic made image Doro!!! Wonderful atmosphere!!!Klasse gemacht und eine tolle story! Hugs Ute
chimera46
Great addition to the series, I too get similar writer's block sometimes, which is why I went with a non sequential approach for my stuff. In any case, great work here!
bunnystuff
i love the future-modern-old-school style miss Samantha has. like she's old fashioned but aint afriad to use the new Zappo-Laser-Burner 400. too dark? i scoff. it ain't too dark. like you said its a dark room yet still light enough to see Sam's firm butt cheeks. your instincts are correct about 99% of the time. trust them! can't wait to see the next one! i'm thinkin it's a thug or the lady in the nude. nothin but anticipation. i'm one of the 2 or 3 people your were talkin about :)
lethalliam
AAAWWWW cool scene.
Unicornst
I think you did perfect on the bedroom. And THANK YOU! I definitely have been waiting for a return to this story. Still very suspenseful.
kbobbitt
REALLY cool lighting & effects, not to mention that sometimes it's just nice to see creativity without an image being too suggestive itself. EXCELLENT!!
KatesFriend
Fascinating story, more please.
drifterlee
Fantastic story and render!!!
Granny_E
The wait has bee worth it. The story and image are a perfect fit! Just take your time and get it the way you want it.
Steff_7
Great lighting and hooray for the return of your story. Glad your over the block. Excellent art and continuation...
JOEANOMALY
The image fits the story perfectly. Excellent!!!!!