Hehe, there's always a robot carrying off a feinted lady in his arms. It just wouldn't be classic 50's sci fi without it! Excellent!

A fascinating SF story you have created and uploaded here! Thanks for sharing with us!!!

I still can't get over how cool the stylizing is...you continue to rock sir!

Well the plot is working, and the 50's look is very nice!

Tobor! Good Gawd,I haven't seen him since I was a lil' tyke. The plot continues ... excellent work!

Excellent work!

Brilliantly done scenes and the story for sure holds my attention. Can't wait for more now. :)

Very well done. 5+.

Young naïve teens, but brave and adventurous. I keep telling them not to go inside, but they won’t listen. They do not heed my warnings. Soon it will be time for them to meet the Martian leader and submit to his many bizarre forms of experimentation. Excellent RBlue. Love the ship’s interior. What I’m learning from your series is how to loosen up artistically – in style, composition, and toolset. It pushes my own need for creative experimentation and the courage to step out of what has become a staid formality of my self.

Thanks for the kind words Rodma Hu. Can't wait to see your next gallery's offering!

Great panel layout. Love the old sci fi black and white movie look of this comic. And that robot Tobor wow very tride and true classic design and moment like shadownet stated.

The grey-scale compensating the absent colors and the presentation of the characters in the scene is plausible. But..one point of criticism! It takes too long time to the next part!

Very good story strip!

I like your comics and will continue reading them. I find your 50s style refreshing. However, I feel I might be able to say a thing or two to help. You have always had an amazing way with words when commenting - I don't see that in your scripts - I wish I would. The first box shows a man and woman standing outside the ship, Dialog is right on. Box two: the two are talking about how big and clean it is - I'm assuming they are in the ship now... Going into the ship is what this strip is lacking. You could of showed some action, croutching down, crawling, looks of excitement... the two could of said they were entering the ship to each other. What happened to the man after the girl fainted??? Showing his reaction could of given you something to work with. I know this is intended to be a comic book of 25 or so pages, but a narrator box would be very helpful and useful. At the top you could say: Somewhere in Arizona, at 12:19 am .... I'm just trying to help inspire and give some ideas, I like what you're doing here. I look forward to seeing what happens next. PS, did I tell ya I have lousy reception on the tv, so this is my way of getting stories told to me.LOL

Excellent addition to the series. I love the retro feel here, and that robot with the girl in his arms literally comes out of 50s movie posters as I recall. Excellent work!

well take a big bite from me:)!!! Love the robot, the story and your excellent work and talent!!

Trust a woman to notice how clean it is!

Fantastic renders and storyline, its great to see the robot! it reminds me of the robot from Lost in Space, do they come in peace, I guess time will tell:) Excellent series, great fun!!

Possible exploratory experiments in the future ?

Reminds me of 'The Day the Earth Stood Still' ...nice one RB!

~Stunning~ Creations... EXCELLENT!! ^5^

Very remarkable page too… I partly agree with what Mikeerson said, because the way the story is told depends about the narrative style. In the great tradition of the comics of the 1935 to 55, i.e. Alex Raymond's Flash Gordon or Edgar-P. Jacobs' Black & Mortimer, everything is told without any gap, whether with an extra panel or with a narrator box. This is said to be true for manga too. But in later Belgian-style adventure comics, when the reader is considered that he can understand what happens, some panels are deliberately not drawn, and no narrative box comes to explain what is considered as self-explaining for the reader; this approach is called an ellipse and it is typical of non-manga comics. Another great point of your story is that there is a suspense at the bottom of the page: we cannot see what will follow. But this raises another point; you say that it is page 9. True that your comics is understood as a web-comics one. But if you hope (and I think it is worth) paper publishing, then normally a page n° 9 will be a left page, and it would be better to get it as a right one; normally the suspense has to increase from the top of the left page to the bottom of the right one. I understand that it is not always easily a point to achieve.

"Tobor... Protect" Gort's in the shop, getting a Lube job. continue to love this style... tension builds, we have the interior of the ship (so clean), the menace of the the Robot, the fainting girl..... cue Del Shannon. Klaatu Verata Nikto!

Good work, keep it going.

I'm a fan!! (^_^)

Like Funky, I too love your style here. I think it's all fabulous!

Tobor as well! Whoever next? Keep up the great work!!!

cool bot, excellent series!

It is very good job! The remarkable image!

Excellent page! I have much to catch up! :) I was looking at your gallery and at the thumbnails for each page, and the quality is outstanding - Bravo! :)