Take Me Along by hipps13
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Description
Sweet Tasting Fun
Sun quench thirst
I will tell you
Do you have too?
Leave me all alone
Watch the clouds
Fade as they go
Wonder how they are
Rain is going to shine
Sweet tasting fun
Take me along
Love by the sea
Slap against the rocks
Waves wash ashore
Sand bare feet love
Squish between toes
Skin melting warm
Sweet tasting fun
Will you join me?
Lonely eyes shine
Can I sit on your lap?
Hug me together
Watch the sunset
Maybe even the sunrise
Sweet tasting fun
Into leaving
Cannot hide
Take me along
Little runaway
Not my time
The moment to go
*Image Bryce 5.5
©LKS 2007
Comments (12)
vaggabondd
Very nice. I wouldn't mind being on this beach with you :)
auntietk
What fun! Love your words, Skipping lightly along, Nice cadence! Nice texture on the hills - I love the way it looks like the tide is out, and will come in again soon!
Thelby
Being a person that works the night shift I have a profound appreciation for the Sunrise. So Beautiful and Golden turning Red. The most Beautiful time of the day, except to wake up by a loved one!!!!! Very Lovely Work Linda!!!!
Bossie_Boots
Fantastic image Linda and heart felt words superbas always hugs lou x
B_PEACOCK
Sure lets go :) BEautiful writing love and awesome image
rainbows
Absolutely beautful work and words, sweet Linda. Like a skipping song the beat. I love the light in your sky too. Have a wonderful day. Gentle hugs. Diane. xx
Denys234
Beautifully done!!
dhama
Reminds me of flashbacks to the days I used to go to the beach. I would add just one thing, sand in the sandwiches, but that is not so sweet tasting. :-)
ARTWITHIN
I read a mixture of joy and melancholy in your beautiful poem. Love the island look of your image, with a tranquil sea. Hugs and big smiles, Linda. Suzanne
lizzibell
very nice...
wawadave
looks barren!
densa
wonderful words and art