Drifting Apart by hipps13
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No Longer a Whole
Been feeling lost
So much alone
Down in the dumps
How much to learn
Mistakes will grow
A little blue
A little silly
What fun and sad
Life can be
Chi is changing
Drifting apart
No longer a whole
Heart will miss
Always love
Time to let go
Move along
Roads to challenge
Life to be known
So afraid of what
Justice than truth
Tears get in the way
Black skies
Black holes
Run from the rain
To see again
Might hurt a little
Not as much tomorrow
As it does now
Chi is changing
Drifting apart
No longer a whole
*Image Bryce 5.5
©LKS 2007
Comments (19)
efferre
Dividing, dissecting..No longer a whole... Very well exposed concept!
Bossie_Boots
Oh Linda this one is so sad superb work as always hugs lou x
auntietk
Image and words, A perfect fit. Moving work, Sad but beautiful.
Richardphotos
in spirit we are with you Linda so you are not alone. very unique water surface and I like how you exploded the object
Thelby
Have to rope-in that apart stuff. Well, the loneliness has always been a friend of mind, but I deal and make friends like you 8^D!!!! Lovely work and I really like the transparency on the rock texture, Nice work!!!
ARTWITHIN
Linda, that is a beautiful abstract image to illustrate your poem. As much as we would like things to stay the same, they never do. Our is a transitioning existence, a circle that never closes, a spiral, a continuous adventure toward oneness. Excellent work all around, my dear. Hugs and big smiles, Suzanne
pupino
So beautiful work and excellent composition on it !
lizzibell
nice work...
mac4gman
Awesome Brycing!
spm91g
Excellent work Linda, very deep words!
angel_dust
Stunning image!!
B_PEACOCK
Cool looking image but a really sad poem. But always tomorrow is another day and chi just may come back together ;) Love ya and huge Hugs
Ionel
Excellently done image and poem! One of your best poems as far as I know, imo!!!
sessan53
Very great work on this picture Bravo:-)hugs sessan
rainbows
Its okay to feel like this sweet, Linda we all do from time to time. Better to express it as you have than to keep it held within.. where it hurts all the more. Your image is beautiful too. Like a moving iceberg. Gentle hugs. Diane.
vaggabondd
good words my poet friend :)
SunsetHunter
How do you do it Linda? Always your poems and images strike just the right chord - feeling that sense of 'drifting apart' and then saw your image! Superb timing! :-)
Denys234
Excellent!!
amlondono
Wonderful Image to expose a subject ! Bravo , Ana