Now that we're thirteen pages into it, you know what keeps me coming back...well, besides the awesome rendering...it's the interactions you've set up, the dynamics of the characters. Ok, and I laughed out loud at the "Don't poke at it, Tommy", hee. Rock on bro!

Ahaha, I love it, the pose on that cop as he says "what's yer name..." is priceless. As for fleshing out the story, you can always use the "meanwhile"/"Back with our heroes" tool to jump between different scenes.

I'm waiting for the next episode ...great work here!

Never realized before what a hot little package Judy is. Yum! Great comp on that last frame. Every page has strong balance.

Wow, 13 pages into this. When you first started, I didn't know you were going to run a series - great Idea, but I wonder If you knew you were going into this... I'm wondering what you feel about it. I've done comics in the past and the last one that I did seriously was 1992 - 15 years ago. I had two weeks to come up with a script and final product to run. I spent probably 13 days designing the 4 main characters. I was very happy with my characters. even though I haven't drawn them in years, little stories run through my head on each character. When I finally learn enough poser, I will bring them to life in 3d. I'm very happy to see you posting this, I anticipate seeing your strip, However, I miss your color renders of old time 50s stuff. Do you have an idea at this point when your final page will be made? Do you have a final page number in your head? And, when it does come, are you going to complete it or leave us hanging for a sequal? Yeah, I know, lots of questions... but you should know me by now.lol ...the part I like the best in this page is where they are all hovered over the alien - I got knocked out at work once and when I woke up that was the view I had - good positioning.

News Flash: Young teenage Martian from Venus out for a joy ride of the galaxy. Stops to make new friends. Gets shot to death by trigger happy Cops! Story at ten! Excellent!

come on judy. give a little babe. great piece i really love your work.

Very good page number 13. Great acting of the characters and the execution is superb! I like all frames - no criticism 5+!!

Well done!!!

Excellent story as it represents the genre well. And the artwork is superb... the POV in the last frame is sublime. Well done!

we're picking up steam... Sydney finally gets up close and personal with Judy who has a sudden girlie thing for a man in uniform. Tommy's going to poke the alien, everybody else will recoil in horror..... cue music as the door to the flying saucer (not a UFO) opens wider, revealing.... getting a big kick out of this storyline. looking forward to some more!

Very well done. 5+.

Wonderful story, really so much work went into this it is obvious. Especially like the character interaction you have going on.

Excellent mate, it put a smile on my face, Sydney is a funny character!! Great artwork and rendering, great series:)

good to see the fat guy as a possible love interest. overweight folks and little people seem to be the brunt of jokes these days only casted as comic relief. i ain't saying ol' Sydney ain't a silly guy i'm just sayin it's good to see he's part of the cast with the same ups and downs and problems that real people have. he's not just some corny side slapstick character. lovin the lookin up POV shot in the last panel. helps keep things fresh. lovin the body language and expressions on the characters. they go hand in hand with their talk bubbles. i hope those aliens have robots

Very interesting style. Now I have to go back and read it from the beginning!

Great flow and layout.Love the human element. The humor is excellent, perhaps the beginning of a triangle?(^_^)

A fascinating story you have posted again! Fabulous really!!!

Again great sequence of events here !If anybody remembers comic books from the early 60's they had a seal of safe content on the bottom left hand corner of the mag itself, bringing in to the role play and molding of young readers such as law inforcement , good goverment , country,teenage follies ,and yes "B" rate sci -fi ,and dare i mention "GOD" in these akward times, more like moral to the story kind of issues ! Hey, i like what your achieving here !

Cute storyline!, and I must read the previous pages to catch up on the characters. I look forward to the continuation of this comic.

I think one of these fellas should be a Sox fan and another one a Cubs fan. That would add some fuel for ya, heheheh. Another excellent edition hon...great stuff.

Very nice I love how you did the last panel. Man chicks dig a guy in uniform huh?

I'm too young to remember these types of comics first time around, but if your reincarnation of them is anything to go by then, they are worth a little investigating..

Really excellent. As Gene (2Loose2Trek), I particulary like the last panel! Great story that, as I said earlier, deserves to be sold by a commercial publisher and printed by offset!

Great POV in that last frame. Nice work on those teenage interactions!!!

Hot little Judy, nice page again!

I really enjoy your dialogues and the humor in your comic - most excellent! :)