Teenage Martians From Venus Page 017 by RBlue

Digital Comics • Science Fiction • posted on Nov 11, 2007

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Another page submitted for your approval. More on their way. Some badly needed change of scenery is on the plate for future installments. Needed to tidy up the plot before closing this stage set and then it's on to some newly built locations. Enjoy and comments are always appreciated.

Comments (25)

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Daramski

7:21PM | Sun, 11 November 2007

Very cool, its like 2 storys rolled into one, the wilds teens and the alien crash landing, I really like it and Im looking forward to the next page, very nice work:)

phlynn

7:42PM | Sun, 11 November 2007

Nothing like a good cat fight. Yeah, take that bitch! Like the sun drenched lighting, the sheen coming off the cops helmet, nice touch. Jets overhead, maybe an indication of what's to come? Superb continuation! Regards kev

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2Loose2Trek

7:52PM | Sun, 11 November 2007

LOL ... wonderful cat 'n dog fight and momentary denouement. Well done.

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delbeke

8:58PM | Sun, 11 November 2007

lol Wow a free for all! Excellent work as usual. Wonderful scenes

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choronr

9:12PM | Sun, 11 November 2007

And then, the calm before the storm ...waitin for the next!

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mikeerson

9:46PM | Sun, 11 November 2007

Looks good... Don't know if you plan on printing this, so I thought I'd ask about one of your captions - Ya know, if you print this, you want it perfect, so I'm just asking if this means something or is it a typo??? - middle of the page to the right edge, you have (it appears) SOB11 - Does that mean something or did you want it SOB!! ...your comic is coming along nicely. I saw on the front page of renderosity in the lower right corner that they are looking for cartoonist to join renderosity's front page. I thought of you and asked them if they saw your comic, I told them It was good and should contact you... Have you heard anything from Renderosity? ...I was just thinking of you. I thought, while you upload in your gallery, you might as well upload in the comic section. Can't wait to see your "new" stuff you've mentioned.

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RBlue

10:13PM | Sun, 11 November 2007

Mike, Good Eye, I meant SOB!! Did this page while sitting on a train sleeper returning from New Orleans. The imaged has since been amended. If you clear your I.E. cache, the change can be seen. Thanks for the proof reading. I did contact the front page editors and found that I would need to package a comic strip fitting their requirements. (Image size and dimentions) I may some day, but prefer to continue this for the time being. Thanks for the reference!

Platin

12:18AM | Mon, 12 November 2007

Wow..this page is full of action and fun. It's a pleasure to view every frame. The poses of the characters are natural and the point of views various. Really a highlight of your story - Perfect work!!!!!

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shadownet

5:51AM | Mon, 12 November 2007

Love the action on this one! Really great job! I am going to be away a bit but will try to keep up with the story when I can. May not get to comment but will be reading more when able. So keep those presses rolling! :O)

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Gor111

7:26AM | Mon, 12 November 2007

It's again a fascinating BW story you have created and posted here! Wonderfully done!!!

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Burpee

9:58AM | Mon, 12 November 2007

Rotfl! So typical for things to get out of hand. Thanks for the fun and action...love the catfight :)

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FunkyShaman

9:58AM | Mon, 12 November 2007

As always, beautiful job...but for the first time, I have one slightly negative comment for ya', and it's just my 'movie trained' eye...on panel's two thru four of this page you break the '180 rule' and have your characters switch sides. Them having dark and light clothing on makes it easier to understand, but still slightly disorienting. Just my two cents. All I know is you better let us know where this can be bought once it's ready to be published! (I have a couple contacts who might be interested if ya' need)

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MajinBoo

10:41AM | Mon, 12 November 2007

There's nothing better than great all out fight scence in failed relationships, heck even the ladies got into. Almost sorry Whitmore brought it to end LOL!

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DRAKELOT

11:53AM | Mon, 12 November 2007

Beautiful images and chapter !

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Odessey

12:47PM | Mon, 12 November 2007

Truly one of the best illustrated comic srtips here at Renderosity !

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Elcet

2:53PM | Mon, 12 November 2007

I approve Odessey! That rocks! Top-notch comic tale with fully graphic professional style and very funny story! Do keep up the great work!

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1358

3:07PM | Mon, 12 November 2007

What's making the teens act so recklessly... is it radiation from the downed spaceship.... or is it over acting hormones, the true terror of life as a teen? Staying tuned for more! (cue music from The Ventures) awesome work... need more!

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magnus073

3:55PM | Mon, 12 November 2007

Really cool all out brawl scene, all very well scripted and done. This whole series of scenes on this release must have taken hours and hours of posing.

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Deane

6:01PM | Mon, 12 November 2007

Nothing like a good catfight, and down goes Sydney as well. Hope those mutants went through decontamination before crash landing :)

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StarChildSong

5:56PM | Tue, 13 November 2007

(^^) This really makes my day!! A comedy of errors and aliens!! More cat fights please. (^^)

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chimera46

4:27PM | Fri, 16 November 2007

LOL! I love it, especially the line "at least he's a man". Please tell me that on the next page Whitmore is going to walk around with his gun in the air...

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