My Friends by beachzz

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Jan 31, 2008

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My Friends Omg what would I do Without my friends These people Who share my life Who listen to me Rant and rave And cry and scream Yell and holler Oh yeah I do all that More often Than you might know But I also Laugh out loud Till tears run Down my cheeks Till I can't see In front of me Laugh till I can hardly breathe And my friends Share that With me And that's golden And I've learned That my friends Do care Do share They talk with me Cry with me Laugh with me Love with me And so For my friends I give you These words For you Are My life My world My heart My soul You are my friends 1/31/08

Comments (16)

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Richardphotos

9:56PM | Thu, 31 January 2008

beautiful writing skills you have and results

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alhak

10:48PM | Thu, 31 January 2008

thats is such a wonderful prose you have written. every verse descibes what a friend should do and be...beautiful

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Chipka

11:03PM | Thu, 31 January 2008

You've done it again...the prose here is absolutely fabulous, and heartfelt. The image accompanying it is top notch as well. You're on a seriously cool roll here and that's always a good thing. Fantastic work and beautiful sentiments. Yeah, and that text-based image accents this so well...it's simple, straightforward, and it doesn't get in the way of what it's actually saying. Great stuff!

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carrotsoup

11:32PM | Thu, 31 January 2008

Fantastic poem. When is your book coming out?

MrsLubner

11:43PM | Thu, 31 January 2008

Very cool. You have a very nice style. :-) Good use of words.

frankie96

12:14AM | Fri, 01 February 2008

Are you sure you have never done this before..:) very nice..and heartfelt..

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auntietk

12:56AM | Fri, 01 February 2008

This is wonderful! You've captured something essential here. Thank you, my friend. :)

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JeffG7BRJ

1:48AM | Fri, 01 February 2008

Wow! Marilyn, this is very profound prose that you have come up with. Thanks for sharing, I think it's beautiful. Bravo!!!!!

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mickuk50

2:16AM | Fri, 01 February 2008

very expressive words filled with all the emotions one should feel about good friends :o)..its a good sight into the marilyn we call a friend too :o) mick

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Thelby

2:17AM | Fri, 01 February 2008

You shuold post the larger pic. Let us see whom you are keepin company with ;^D

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photostar

11:09AM | Fri, 01 February 2008

And since meeting you here on this site, Marilyn, you are one of my friends that I hold the same sentiment for. Thanks for sharing.

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artaddict2

1:27PM | Fri, 01 February 2008

Hey, your good with theses words. Extraordinary!

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Tanglimara

1:42PM | Fri, 01 February 2008

Glad to be a friend of yours Marilyn, love your gallery and poems. Now then, who's getting the next round of drinks in hee hee. Tony :-)

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goodoleboy

4:09PM | Fri, 01 February 2008

Thank you, Marilyn, for that vote of confidence, but difficult as it is in this world in turmoil, you've got to get ahold of yourself! In any event, good writing!

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