Where are you? by KristiS

Writers • Romance • posted on Mar 06, 2008

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I call your name, you never come. I reach for you, You never come. I ask everyone about you but noone seems to know who you are. I want you here with me. I need you! I don't know why you left me. Where did you go? You are here with me everynight but when I awake, you are gone. Could it be, that you are only in my dreams.

Comments (6)

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vaggabondd

9:38PM | Sat, 08 March 2008

I hope it is more then dreams. nice work

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sim3344

11:46AM | Sun, 09 March 2008

Very beautiful!!!!

FracJay

8:08PM | Thu, 20 March 2008

How thought provoking...very nice!

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meico

1:06PM | Thu, 10 April 2008

We meet, it seems, our dream lover so often in reverie ... but real life will always hold surprises, and we can always hope. Nicely written. Mike

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Chipka

11:27AM | Thu, 17 April 2008

Beautifully written; there is romance here, and a tinge of darkness as well! I love the feeling of absolute longing that you've captured and presented in this. You wrote two lines: "I ask everyone about you/but no one seems to know who you are." I love those two lines, they stick out the most; partly because there COULD be a supernatural element involved, but you leave the writing just concrete and ambiguous enough to let lines like those play in our mind.

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