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A Very Great Thing

Writers People posted on Apr 11, 2008
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A Very Great Thing Wow Sometimes I surprise myself The things I do The places I go This time I've done more Gone further than ever It's given me This great new feeling Of being alive Of being true to myself Of finding out who I am I am woman Strong Powerful Comfortable In my own skin I am happy Fulfilled Excited Wondrous Truly awed By this life of mine I love it! 4/11/08 I'm in Atlanta, once again having connectivity issues, so can't get to any of my fotos to post, or include them with this poem. I'm having such a great time, seeing so many new things and places I can't get too upset about it~~~so I'll just be patient and catch up when I get home!!

Comments (23)


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missykia

12:03AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

:) Nice poem.

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DaveDavis

12:03AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

Awesome Marilyn. Enjoy!! I'm back in Auburn and its HOT this time, no snow :(

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Richardphotos

12:05AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

you sure travel a lot. beautiful prose you have wrote

MrsLubner

12:27AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

Atlanta - so now you are a Georgia Peach? :-) I know you have to be seeing some incredible things. I have been through a few times but never stopped long enough to look around. Always been over that way by car though. I know you have to be enjoying it. The south has such charm...

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meico

12:40AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

"The Gypsy Rover came over the hill..." sounds like a superb bit of 'finding yourself to me - I envy you! Mike

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camtheman

12:59AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

pulling out your creative writing side there Mo! I like it! Small bits of Hiku in there... hiku i hope i spelled that right. haha. ive tried a few poems for school assignments, your writing pace is like my own. quick and descriptive. Which is nice cuz i can flow with your writing really well and truely get into it! ^^ good job Mo!

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bangonthedrums

1:29AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

thanks so much for sharing your wondrous journey of discovery! bloom on... :)

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Thelby

3:24AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

In Hotlanta!!! Big Place for sure!! NIce writing and hope after the weather clears up there you can post some photos!!!!!

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Mad-Mike

4:03AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

Very cool poem Marilyn! and California misses ya! but! at least you're having fun cool!!! Bounce 5 yeah hYperS lol

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Chipka

4:22AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

Ah...connectivity issues and catching up! It's that how it always goes, when you're traveling and seeing/feeling/sensing new and wonderful things?! Your words capture so much, so beautifully. I guess if I were Russian and using a snooty, obscure definition of a rather famous Russian word, I could call you "Moy sputnik," or maybe it's "Moy sputnika," since I'd have to give the name a female ending. I think. Anyway...the snooty, obscure meaning of that word can be translated as "fellow traveler." It's good to read word from a fellow traveler and I'd love to see more. I have a lot of catching up to do anyway, so I'd best get started.

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SapUS59

4:27AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

great poem and hope your having fun on your trip.

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timtripp

6:31AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

thanks

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JeffG7BRJ

6:44AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

Way to go gal, you carry on and enjoy, have fun and take loads of pictures for us to look at when you get back. Sure sounds like you are having a ball, keep it up but also stay safe. Excellent prose. Bravo!!!!!

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photostar

8:55AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

If you are enjoying yourself, there in Atlanta, that's what counts, Marilyn. Have a fun time.

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mickuk50

9:04AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

the only thong thats important is you having a great time .dont even give us a second thought :o(..lol just as long as your ok have a good time and be good and if you can`nt be good be careful !! mick

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auntietk

10:46AM | Sat, 12 April 2008

You go girl! Both in life, and in poetry. Push the limits! Find out who you are when nobody's looking! Oh yes ... and have fun!! :) Yay!

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hipps13

3:34PM | Sat, 12 April 2008

wonderful work thanks for the brightness warm hug, Linda

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goodoleboy

5:23PM | Sat, 12 April 2008

That's very nice, Marilyn, but in your exultation be advised that if you were a woman in India, Afghanistan, Saudi Arabia, or various other Middle East nations, your status as a person would be greatly reduced, virtually to a state of slavery or second class citizenship, as opposed to what you have here in the good old US of A. Have a good trip!

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artaddict2

3:42AM | Sun, 13 April 2008

We should all take a leaf outa your book and do the same! Good for you Marilyn.

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vaggabondd

10:38AM | Sun, 13 April 2008

What a awesome poem. Your passion just jumps off the screen. Very nice work my friend :)

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AusPoet

7:15PM | Sun, 13 April 2008

Congrats on your travels Beachzz! A nice reflection on womanhood here too. :D

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pryor_chris

7:17PM | Sun, 13 April 2008

YOU GO GIRL!!!

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jocko500

7:34PM | Mon, 14 April 2008

cool words


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