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CHRYSALIS

Writers (none) posted on Apr 18, 2008
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I was once asked how I composed a poem: Did I just “let it all flow out?” Did I revise the result? Did I plan [as in a flow chart] the general outline first? Did I follow any traditional poetic model? Since I did none of those things, I was at a bit of a loss. My poems sort of grow – they are truly organic. Thus began a search for a metaphor, a starting point. The concept of the chrysalis is the nearest I can get: [1] The internal re-distribution and re-assembly of cells of a pupating larva [i.e. within the chrysalis case] is similar to the mix of private images - which may not be verbal and may be meaningful only to me - and ordinary public language. All of which I can ‘read’ in some way within the structure of the growing poem. [2] The chrysalis case reflects the overall shape of the adult being produced within: likewise I am aware throughout the process of the general shape of the developing poem, but not necessarily the details. [3] So, for what it’s worth, this is what ‘grew’ this time. CHRYSALIS The question you pose: how I compose my party pieces and pen my paltry poems, salty tales or plain-writ lines. So close your eyes, my precious, fluff the cushions, recline, open ears and mind, and visualise. Imagine, if you will, a scattered clump of plump industrious caterpillars hump-stumping through the ganglionic cortical maze, nose-nudging a reluctant neurone here, sparking a sluggish synapse there; a herd of diligent neurotransmitters winkling out wedges of memory, slivers of speech and great drifts of discussion and debate. You can trace their silken tracks with ease, estimate their direction, describe the lucid structure of every unremarkable linguistic task. Imagine further, as you must, a sudden interruption to this cosy round which sends one such sorry caterpillar all of scurry to find a comfy corner, spin a silvered net to catch itself, attach itself and palpitate alone. Look carefully and you’ll remark an unexpected hardening of soft skin turned architectural, translucent, crystalline. Within you see – in glimpses – the roiling moil of mixed and molten images a semiotic stew of private symbols, public signs and, every now and then, a word or two you understand. If you’re very careful, and you bide your time, you may slip inside a simile or two or mix a metaphor within the brew. And all this time the exoskeleton takes the strain, tectonic distortions on a micro scale, and shows some semblance of the life within and, more important, of the life to be. The shifting drifting reconstructions rumble on until a sudden seismic shudder shakes the case, a crack appears, gapes and gives release to green full-grown imago, wet and trembling on the very verge of flight. In the sunlight, wings full spread, the butterfly takes the air: and I can pin and pen the fulgent new-born words upon the pristine page.

Comments (18)


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mickuk50

7:59AM | Fri, 18 April 2008

becoming a necessity to read your work .superbly written :o) mick

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Chipka

8:25AM | Fri, 18 April 2008

Your description of how you compose a poem is as compelling as the poem itself! Both are fully engaging and filled with wonderful, smart flourishes. Beautifully done on all counts!

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beachzz

9:01AM | Fri, 18 April 2008

It's hard to explain where the words come from, but not only did you explain it, you did it with grace, humor and a whole lot of feeling!!

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dhanco

9:17AM | Fri, 18 April 2008

Such a wonderful explanation and poem, Mike. A perfect way to begin a day and wish I had just a tiny bit of your talent. Beautifully written.

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RodolfoCiminelli

9:52AM | Fri, 18 April 2008

Wonderful and creative realization my friend....!!! I like the very beautiful colors and the textures

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helanker

10:50AM | Fri, 18 April 2008

OHH! Sometimes I wish I was born English Speeking. Today I really wanted to understand all that you wrote. Unfortunately I dont. But I still I sence some of your mood and feelings in your words. Il have to do with that. In this case I wond rely on a translater. :)))

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hipps13

2:49PM | Fri, 18 April 2008

Hi Mike so many words flow if one understands where is the fun to learn to grow wonderful work many thoughts and a smile sweet weekend to you warm hug and love, Linda

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leanndra

3:08PM | Fri, 18 April 2008

Mike, You write so eloquently of a process that produces beauty as the final result. A wonderful metaphor for what you bring forth from your inner self. To share oneself so keenly, as you consistantly do, takes personal courage. I salute you! Lea

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auntietk

5:00PM | Fri, 18 April 2008

Huh. That's an interesting question. Every once in a while I realize I'm composing a few lines of poetry in response to some received input. If it doesn't go away, I write it down, and keep going until I'm done. So the original nugget sort of forms itself around an idea (I suppose like nacre around a grain of sand) but once I've recognized the irritation and thought about it for a while, I just sit down to write and it all flows out. There isn't much conscious process between the grain of sand and the finished poem. I love your explanation. It makes for wonderful poetry! :)

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amota99517

5:45PM | Fri, 18 April 2008

Beautiful art and wonder pros. I can relate to the unfolding of the words that come from within. For me it akin to taking dictation. Splendid work!!!

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Meisiekind

2:40AM | Sat, 19 April 2008

What a graceful and amazing flow of poetic words to describe what I believe flows from your heart and soul everytime you write a single line of poetry. Brilliant my dear friend - absolutely brilliant. And the image touches deep! Hugs, Carin xx

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algra

6:38AM | Sat, 19 April 2008

Beautiful image and a nice text.

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romanceworks

11:34AM | Sat, 19 April 2008

A marvelous poem. Though research stimulates ideas, and is the perfect food for a vivid imagination, somehow I still believe, and have experienced, that the flow of words comes from some magic place that will forever remain a mystery, as beautiful a miracle as the transformation from fuzzy fat creature to winged beauty. CC

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avalonfaayre

8:15PM | Sat, 19 April 2008

Chrysalis Concept. I used to get 'inspired' at the most inopportune times. I don't know if it was an escape or something developing from a twitch or a scare that sent my "sorry caterpillar all of scurry to find a comfy corner" but eventually when I kept putting it on the shelf for a more opportune moment, I found it had dried up and blown away. Nothing left but a smile. Kind of like the Cheshire Cat. Well, I love this. I understand it. I wish I had your way of painting with words. It is an art in itself. Lovely image as well.

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AusPoet

7:43AM | Sun, 20 April 2008

Oh, I like this one, Mike. A great depiction of something which is frequently indescribable. If someone were to pose this question to me, I would struggle to find a suitable answer. Well done Mike!

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amirapsp

12:49PM | Sun, 20 April 2008

Just Beautiful!!!

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busi2ness

9:56PM | Mon, 21 April 2008

You make it sound so simple yet again Mike, even if I followed your advice to a Tee I would not be able to reproduce what your chrysalis is bringing forth, every time. Keep going, you combine more than one art form masterfully.

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lucyjo

6:50AM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Beautiful!


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