thin red lines by NothingNess
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Description
in the young
life flows
dark and red
a feminine renewal
an ancient ritual
a spherical mass
of warm droplets
magic and star dust
falling on carnal lust
all of life's mysteries
are contained in
the pulsating vein
a chemical reaction
as barriers become thin
reality blurs
as you bleed; you see
and feel that phantom itch
that you can't scratch
the lil fly you can't swat
the lil bitch that doesn't know
when to quit
in tuned
imbued
an angel becomes
seer
witch
and territorial bitch
sometimes a blessing
always a curse
Comments (5)
meico
There is much power in this, though I feel in some ways like an intruder into some esoteric woman's ritual from which men are debarred. Not that I don't understand - the excellent imagery is clear and beautifully developed - but more that I'm simply unable to personally relate to the theme. The curse, you see, will never fall on me ... though I'm unsure that this is a blessing. Superb poetry. Favourite. Mike
beachzz
Oh yeah, I hear you LOUD and clear~~~~this is awesome!!!
se_400_Lux
Spring in all things will show against the flow (as has been said - you can't push the river) flowers bloom around as I water in the garden by afternoon shade expected rain yesterday...
auntietk
Well done!
hipps13
so glad to see a post love to read your words they stand out and speak as I listen to what is said sweet smile to you warm hug, Linda