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PAS DE DEUX

Writers Romance posted on May 18, 2008
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PAS DE DEUX You're my only prayer: wrapped in surpassing praise, adorned with desires. I'm tired: your perfume, pleasing as a ripe pressed peach, enlivens and lifts. Transatlantic songs like up-close dirty dancing: electrotherapy. She whispers, "Last time ..." Alas last times linger, never last

Comments (21)


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tallpindo

5:08AM | Sun, 18 May 2008

The most memorable dance I ever took with a gilr was on the thrid floor of a house where the crowd was so great the house swayed and shook with the music. "Louie! Louie!" was playing. A soft cotillion would have been safer. I had carried the second barrel of beer behind my head on a rough ice covered sidewalk then ascended the two flights of stairs. The girl felt something poking her and my friend offered his room just down the street and "There's condoms in the poncho hung by the bed." That was no way to keep the keys. A juvenile ghost would perish that night. The adult would emerge no longer on foot.

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tennesseecowgirl

7:40AM | Sun, 18 May 2008

wonderful work :)

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elisheba

7:55AM | Sun, 18 May 2008

funny how I first read "pas de jeux" wich means "no games" I like how my mother tongue is used in english , despite the global french people's rudeness "french" sill means classy, sensual, trendy and gastronomic properties...LOL! :)

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tizjezzme

8:02AM | Sun, 18 May 2008

You make me think of some special moments on the dance floor. :) Beautiful words, once again, Mike.

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RodolfoCiminelli

8:19AM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Wonderful and creative work my friend.....!!!!

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helanker

8:39AM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Very beautiful. :)

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kansas

10:03AM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Ah, the memories of times long gone.

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dhanco

10:15AM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Beautiful poetry and yes, there's something special about a dance with a special person. You've portrayed it very well, Mike.

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romanceworks

10:44AM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Yes, sure brings back those special memories and moments on the dance floor. Beautiful poem. CC

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Meisiekind

11:02AM | Sun, 18 May 2008

I'm deeply touched Mike. This is stunning poetry. A definite fav!! Hugs, Carin :)

lil_t

11:31AM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Very nice Mike, your poem speaks so much, with so few words!! Beautiful!! :)

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novelist

11:43AM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Brilliant poem!!!

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amota99517

12:44PM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Beautiful words that bring back fond memories.

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leanndra

12:58PM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Mike, this seems more intimate than one last dance. There is a sadness that is evident, at least to me in this prose. Memory is a funny thing. This last little verse says it all... She whispers, "Last time ..." Alas last times linger, never last Lea

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G_Mansco

1:14PM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Beautiful poetry and picture ;O)

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algra

2:31PM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Sweet and sultry! Some melancholy in it. Nice work Mike!

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bangonthedrums

2:32PM | Sun, 18 May 2008

mike, this is a true gem - wrapping as it does so many feeling and a memory into such an eloquently pithy few lines! their brevity and beauty of language leave me, much as the last dance they describe, simultaneously uplifted and wanting more, sad to see them draw to a close... well done, my friend! michael

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auntietk

9:13PM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Ahhh. I like the first lines best: You're my only prayer: wrapped in surpassing praise, adorned with desires. We each have our own memories.

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hipps13

10:23PM | Sun, 18 May 2008

Hi Mike I have a lot of memories dancing I can still seem them in color as music is heard sweet smile to you warm hug and love, Linda

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beachzz

12:20AM | Mon, 19 May 2008

Dancing close, oh yes, even though it ends too fast, I remember that, yes I do!!

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amirapsp

12:08PM | Tue, 27 May 2008

Another awesome piece...Hugs


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