i won't smoke by sky13point1
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Description
i
won’t
smoke cigars
and drink tequila
with Rosa anymore
i didn’t feel it
on the dance floor
i didn’t even feel it
walking out the door
this morning
that fog found my head
memory nerves are dead
i did?
that’s what I smell
What?
I wasn’t suppose
to inhale?
now be mean
laugh and make fun
while i’m green
that’s it
i
won’t
smoke cigars
and drink tequila
with Rosa anymore
Comments (6)
se_400_Lux
promise not to laugh but must ask why? why? why?
meico
A wry and witty piece of versifying - most entertaining! Mike
Chipka
Witty and refreshing; I love the lightness of this as well as the very vivid image this produces in my mind! Funny, I think in a sense, we all have friends like Rosa.
LovelyPoetess
Bravo! Yea, that Rosa sounds like a bad influence!!! LOL Well done! : )
beachzz
Ah, the Rosas of life, they can make it more interesting, even if it doesn't last!!
Wolfspirit
Okay, now I am laughing, excuse me, on my initial comment, I was thinking as I was reading, I'm selfish, awe, it happens! "Laughs" thanks for sharing, this time around, all fun!