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SHADOWS

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Jun 01, 2008
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I found this poem scrawled in pencil on the back of an old cigarette packet which was tucked in a side pocket of an old rucksack I was throwing out. I remember writing it when, in my late teens, I was living semi-rough on the resort coast of North Wales after the only serious row I had with my mother. I had placed my sleeping bag on this warm night on a grass verge. Behind me was a lighted window with a vase of daffodils .... SHADOWS Shadows cast by daffodils black against the wall motionless Outside a feather lost by a lone and migrant bird floating downwards Inside silhouettes of daffodils darken, darken and thoughts like unexpected feathers forever fall

Comments (27)


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NekhbetSun

6:09AM | Sun, 01 June 2008

I love this little snippet from your past...awesome, as always, m'darlin' Mike XOX

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algra

6:43AM | Sun, 01 June 2008

Pretty poem, we're now cherish our memories. Nice illustration too!

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lucyjo

6:43AM | Sun, 01 June 2008

It is beautiful Mike!

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furuta

7:12AM | Sun, 01 June 2008

Wonderful poem!! I feel comfortable your memories story.

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kansas

7:27AM | Sun, 01 June 2008

Glad you found this memory from your past. Very nice words.

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RodolfoCiminelli

8:16AM | Sun, 01 June 2008

Fantastic work my friend, is beautiful and creative......!!!!

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heartnsoul

8:33AM | Sun, 01 June 2008

What a great find!! I wish I still had my poems and stories from when I was young. Even at such a young age your write is perfection.

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leanndra

8:47AM | Sun, 01 June 2008

A lovely little poem, and an equally lovely image~ So you write down little snippets here and there too? ;) Lea

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hipps13

9:59AM | Sun, 01 June 2008

Hi Mike wonderful work shines thanks for the manys smiles you create and the thoughts you seem to bring out sweet smile weekend to you warm hug and love, Linda

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dhanco

10:00AM | Sun, 01 June 2008

Beautiful memories and words you've stumbled upon, Mike. Thanks for sharing them.

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helanker

10:47AM | Sun, 01 June 2008

So sweet and pretty. Sigh!

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novelist

10:53AM | Sun, 01 June 2008

It's always an adventure to discover an old poem or journal we've written, and it often takes us back to that place and reminds us how far we've come in life--like hearing an old song, but better because we wrote it. Your voice was clear and evocative then just as it is now.

lil_t

11:15AM | Sun, 01 June 2008

Beautiful art and words of times gone by, yet the memories are not forgotten! Excellent, Mike! :)

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G_Mansco

12:45PM | Sun, 01 June 2008

Short lovely poem ;O)

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auntietk

1:52PM | Sun, 01 June 2008

That's amazing. You wrote that when you were a teenager? My dear, you truly have a gift. You were born to be a poet - it's a pleasure to read your work!

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Meisiekind

2:45PM | Sun, 01 June 2008

Glorious words to give us a peek in your past! Excellent work once again dear friend! Hugs, Carin :)

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avalonfaayre

3:44PM | Sun, 01 June 2008

So deep for a young man. An unpleasant occasion, the argument, but awesome Beauty for ashes.

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amota99517

6:16PM | Sun, 01 June 2008

A most endearing voice from the past. Even then your pros were heart felt. Bravo!!

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beachzz

8:02PM | Sun, 01 June 2008

Wow, buried treasure~~~sweet, poignant words!!

vlaaitje

4:32AM | Mon, 02 June 2008

always nice to find a precious moment written on paper, wonderl words

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tallpindo

6:21AM | Mon, 02 June 2008

The pilgrim has reminders of the openess of life to celebrate.

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romanceworks

1:04AM | Tue, 03 June 2008

No fun to fight with the one who loves you the most. Your words captured the hurt .And the loneliness when you left the nest. CC ,

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tizjezzme

8:19PM | Tue, 03 June 2008

Yes, wonderful "snippet from your past" ... you've obviously been writing all your life, which makes you the master of all writers TODAY. hugs

Wolfspirit

9:41PM | Wed, 04 June 2008

Thanks for sharing your personal thoughts then, while reading this I too, can remember times as such and the thoughts that followed and the beliefs in those thoughts established statements/clubs inside the mind to beat hell out of myself with, instead of recognizing them for what they were, questions.

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flaviok

1:52PM | Tue, 17 June 2008

Fantástica liberdade poética, imagem maravilhosa, aplausos (5)

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amirapsp

2:13PM | Tue, 17 June 2008

Beautiful colorful render!!

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mamabobbijo

8:37PM | Sat, 21 June 2008

A moment frozen in time. I bet it's enough to recall the smells and sounds of that night.


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