T Raider - WIP by Jadelu

Poser • Pin-ups • posted on Jun 28, 2008

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I've been looking at this image for a while now and it's missing "something"? Any and all ideas on how to improve it is gladly accepted! --- Thanks for looking and enjoy the weekend!!

Comments (23)

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Danceswithroos

6:00AM | Sat, 28 June 2008

Nope. Had a really good look...and she has plenty of everything she needs! :) Very sexy raider. Brilliant work!

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Hexekati

6:01AM | Sat, 28 June 2008

Great effect, cute girl, well done!

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lightelf

6:03AM | Sat, 28 June 2008

This picture only has three colours. The flesh colour,grey and green.I think that it could be more colourful, which would make it more eye-catching. Flowers or butterflies in the foreground perhaps and some rays of sunlight in the background to make it more interesting.

atlas7

6:47AM | Sat, 28 June 2008

Great job !! I like the colors !! And I'm ready to go raiding with her... ATLAS7

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Giolon

6:52AM | Sat, 28 June 2008

I dunno man, I think I'm in love! What you see as missing might be that the image seems a little off balance, stemming from the "gaping hole" in the upper left corner. If something were there to fill it in, maybe rays of sunshine like lightelf suggests.

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meselfr

7:35AM | Sat, 28 June 2008

2 cute!!! nice work

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mauk

7:50AM | Sat, 28 June 2008

Nice work!!!!!!

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tetsu-pino

7:56AM | Sat, 28 June 2008

Very beautiful and sexy portrait!! Excellent work.

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thecytron

8:37AM | Sat, 28 June 2008

Xcellent modeling work!

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chimera46

10:08AM | Sat, 28 June 2008

Superb render! The DOF works well here and that's quite a convincing combination of ruins and ferns. As for what it's missing, I think some of her "tools of the trade" could be added here, be it a shovel/pick, weapons, a backpack on the side of the block, a map, a recovered artifact, etc. As for the gaping hole on the upper left, if this were a comic that would be the perfect place for a caption, so I'd leave it as it is. As for the colour scheme, I don't mind there only being a few colours though if you intend to add to it I'd put a splash of different brighter colour where you want the audience to look, presumedly on her. Changing the eye/hair colour would be the easiest change to do in that regard.

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jwiest

10:29AM | Sat, 28 June 2008

I think there's two things. She needs to be missing some clothing :D And maybe a prop or two that would go with theme would help. Tools of the trade as chimera put it. She's nice and busty though! :D

matches30

11:49AM | Sat, 28 June 2008

missing a whip? :)

hleon

12:33PM | Sat, 28 June 2008

excellent!!!! ++++5555

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Fidelity2

1:13PM | Sat, 28 June 2008

Your image is very nice. 5+.

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elfguy

1:29PM | Sat, 28 June 2008

Lovely girl!

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felinx

1:31PM | Sat, 28 June 2008

Très joli personnage et belle lumière :)Bravo!!

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Robert0921

6:41PM | Sat, 28 June 2008

Woot!

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LBAMagic

10:55PM | Sat, 28 June 2008

Gorgeous work.

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PoserHobbit

12:24AM | Sun, 29 June 2008

Fantastic work! She looks great I would pull the camera back just a bit, the cut off on the head and feet distract from the greatness of the middle. (You asked! LOL!)

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