I'd really like to hear some comments on the WRITING (I know the art is not so hot!). If something strikes you as genuinely unfunny I'd like to hear about it. Thanks! Page 2 shows my feeble attempts at trying to freehand Asian lettering! Looks pretty bad! :-) It's supposed to be a minor joke that Suki has Japanese sound effects all around her but Cholanda has Korean sounds. I don't know... this page seems kind of lopsided - I should have made the top panels smaller and the bottom ones bigger, but I was pretty far along before I figured that out. I'm thinking "dialogue first" and am using huge (if it were in print) fonts to make it easier to read on-screen. I was debating on whether to use a different set of costumes for the bottom frames. I figured "intellectual property" and all... But then I thought, who would get in a fuss about a Hopi American Indian wig and a bikini?