I think this version is nicer. The hair is fantastic, realistic looking and very dynamic and dramatic. I like the shadows better too. The only thing I dont like in this version is her eye color and makeup - too dark and heavy. I love her smile! I agree with comments on the prev version that some attention to more dramatic lighting and maybe darker background may enhance her appearance.

Much better... the first one you posted, you could see the panties were a problem area... sometimes before I render, I notice some things are just out of place and even playing with the dials, sometimes it's not enough to make it look right... Points of views can help in this area, just like in this upload... favorite part? Definately the hair.... great artists are messured by fixing mistakes, you fixed it and it looks great... the eyeliner is all in preference, I like it in this, could it look better? again, it's all in preference.

This is lovely! I like it very much! DO keep up the good work. DPH

Poser hair... the last frontier. Someday.. This is much improved from the last. I think depthmap shadows could get you much of this darkened shadowing you just did. Looks like it was fun. Looks balanced.

hair is much better! that particular prop drives me batty with it's flat strands... i really need to get better with my hair painting. I seem to see some anatomy and proportioning problems with that right hand in the FG but that could just be me.

The hair is very nice! I still haven't practiced much at painting hair. Lovely character and pose. =)

First of all: this is much better!!! At the hair I like the play of the colours and the pose. Where it covers her head it looks great. Don't know why but on a closer look it seems a bit blurred as if its shadows doesn't fit exactly. Also the corset looks much better. A detail it didn't recognized at the other version is that it stands off a bit - what makes it more realistic, I think. Perhaps you did nothing to it but the difference in lighting show effect. It has much more contrast and makes it more dynamic. So it does for her skin. Really good!!! I'm able to see the vene on her left arm :) Her make-up? yes it's too dark I think, but so it was in the earlier render and at last it's up to everybody. 5*

Oh, the hair looks fantastic! The changes in lighting were very effective but it's not fundamentaly different, so I would say that, IMO, my previous comments still apply. I guess you would have to re-render to change that anyway. Same goes to the background. Yes, the eyeliner seems a bit too strong but that's a matter of personal preference, some women do use it like that in real life. The problem with the strap is now not so visible because of the crop and POV. The most disturbing thing for me is the excessive twist of her right forearm/hand and the excessive bend of the last joint of several fingers (being the most obvious the right index finger, right middle finger, left ring finger). Her subtle hint of a smile is very well achieved. That, together with the pose of the left hand and eyes, creates a consistent feeling of shyness. Well done!

Excellent

Fantastic hairs and beauty Lady...bravissimo!V:DDD.Hugsxx

I´m in the halfway position of throwing my computer away or throwing myself away from everything. Had to reset the hard disk and things are going terribly wrong since then. That´s why it took much more time to open the whole image and had the chance to spent more time with the upper part of your image. And I thought OMG ! Real people at last! The morphs, the lighting, the textures; everything looks fine. Let´s say that I felt in love with what we call a medium shot ( the medium shot) of the character´s image. (I know it´s a matter of personal taste) but I don´t like the way she is dressing; I mean, not for this specific image. I´d prefer a kind of cloth that don´t rivalize with the character_ too many hard/thick black lines, splicing the character´s body, and driving the viewer attention towards different directions. Anyhow, I saw the previous version and I think you´re working on the right direction.

really lovely !, beautiful pose and excelent textures, fantastic !