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Love Across the Sky

Writers Romance posted on Sep 27, 2008
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LOVE ACROSS THE SKY He flung his love for her Across the sky, Written in letters A hundred feet tall. Anyone could see He was enchanted. She told me It was a joy To see how happy he was, How he soared and sailed How he bloomed and grew Bouyed by her love. During hours and hours (and hours) Of conversation, They talked about everything From lawn care and dishes To childhood trauma To marriage and forever. She was amazed, she said, That no subject was taboo, No topic too painful to broach. Everything was fair game And open for discussion, Every conversation a healing. He wrote his love for her Across her heart In letters micrometers tall That only she could feel. There were days I thought I could see them Reflected in her face, Her joy shining through. She said those words Were the things he saw in her. Confidence, intelligence, Humor, creativity, Passion, honesty ... She smiled and said She couldn't remember All the things he loved about her. The list was far too long. The words on her heart were true, And I could see How she bloomed and grew, Soared and sailed, Buoyed by his love. They worked through issues, Obstacles, fears, and tears. One by one, Barriers to happiness Collapsed before their love. Only time would tell, But it looked like they had it made. I'm sorry to tell you It all fell apart. I got a phone call. She was in tears. Something new Had come to light. A deal breaker, And it was over. Since she is my friend And I barely knew him, I can only tell you this: All those things He wrote on her heart Were already a part of her. She didn't need him To tell her who she was. She's one of the most Amazing women I know, And she's doing fine. I won't lie to you. There were days When all I could do Was hold her while she cried. But more and more these days, We talk about other things, Other interests. She rarely mentions him now. There are times, though, When the wind blows From a certain direction, And I can see the remnants Of their love In tatters across the clouds. .......... I wrote this poem for a friend, and she said it was okay to post it, but not to tell you her name. It's okay - none of you know her anyway. Here's the lesson for all you men ... somewhere out there is a woman who knows ALL the details of your relationship! .......... Background image painted in ArtRage, text added in Photoshop 6.

Comments (17)


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kimariehere

8:37PM | Sat, 27 September 2008

beautifully written .... wonderful story and poem ....i enjoyed this !!!

PD154

8:44PM | Sat, 27 September 2008

Excellent verse again Tara.

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Lunastar

9:15PM | Sat, 27 September 2008

Oh this is amazing work. I love this poem!

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cmolsen2002

9:16PM | Sat, 27 September 2008

Very powerful stuff, Tara! This is beautifully, poignantly written and incredibly evocative. Wonderful work.............

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goodoleboy

9:40PM | Sat, 27 September 2008

Poignancy at its most profound, but at this stage of life, I don't relate to this situation at all, and probably never will.

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barbdennist

10:34PM | Sat, 27 September 2008

What a moving poem. I feel like I am invading someone's private space where I don't belong. This is powerful. I'm glad your friend is moving on with her life and healing.

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ontar1

10:42PM | Sat, 27 September 2008

Wow, very powerful, excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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beachzz

12:35AM | Sun, 28 September 2008

This just takes my breath away...every bit of it....and some of it's way too familiar. It's never easy getting over love gone wrong.

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helanker

2:52AM | Sun, 28 September 2008

A beautiful Poem, Tara, but oh so very sad.

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durleybeachbum

3:15AM | Sun, 28 September 2008

Brilliant!!

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JeffG7BRJ

6:24AM | Sun, 28 September 2008

I can relate to this Tara, Pauline and I are both from broken marriages but have been together now for 22 years. On reading this I can see ellements of it for both of us, the second from last verse and the line she rarely mentions him now, applies to both of us. Superb prose, very powerful words, starts happy, gets sad, ends up OK, more than OK really. These things happen more and more in this 'Modern' society, it is nice to hear that she is getting on with her life now. There are still lots of B*****ds out there Tara, but there are still a few gentlemen about. I do not profess to be either, I let others decide that. Excellent work. Bravo!!!!!

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NekhbetSun

6:35AM | Sun, 28 September 2008

This is a nice surprise Tara ! ....great writing and she really didn't need that man for validation....hope you do more

lucindawind

8:14AM | Sun, 28 September 2008

wonderful !

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hipps13

3:56PM | Sun, 28 September 2008

Hi Tara May wonderful work warm hug and love, Linda Kaye

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Merrylee

4:59PM | Sun, 28 September 2008

You have real talent Tara.....you always amaze me...this is well written.

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npauling

7:07PM | Sun, 28 September 2008

Lovely poem Tara and very well written. A story close to so many hearts.

gwenevere

6:11PM | Tue, 16 December 2008

Tara, this is very deep. something that you are so good at writing. I admit i'm envious.i wish i could get this level of thought and feeling into my Muralsu character.


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