Finding Balance by auntietk
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FINDING BALANCE
So many years
My life in balance
Standing in the center
Of who I was
Suddenly
New lessons
Deep experiences
Shook up what I knew
A bit off balance
Thrown for a loop
The wild ride was
Worth every second
Conversation with a friend
Reminded me today
Be who you are
All else follows
New information
Requires integration
I'm still on the path
I was already walking
Capabilities expanded
Vision enlarged
Everything I learned
Was about myself
Coming back to center
Wobble slowing down
Loop closing
Finding balance
..........
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Comments (25)
Geoaskier
when you find it....I could use some too!
West_coaster07
Very nice Tara...
nicesmallflame
... WONDER weaves thru your lines with ease Good flow, I like... nsf
jocko500
wonderful words
Pewter7
A beautiful poem, well penned! :)
durleybeachbum
Excellent!
lunchlady
Fantastic words to live by!
PhrankPower
Those words I can relate to. That's what writing and reading are all about!
DAVER2112
Excellent work Tara! :)
hipps13
wonderful Tara May warm hug and love, Linda Kaye
helanker
Beautiful Tara :)
PD154
Excellence Tara, you express this wonderfully, well done!
Fidelity2
Perfect. 5+.
beachzz
i stand in wonder what the next day has in store your words give me hope
bronwyn_lea
Made me smile! I enjoyed the words!
Chipka
Balance...ah...I'd almost forgotten what that was! You've crystallized so much here, and yes..."be who you are/all else follows". That is pure wisdom, elegantly stated.
JeffG7BRJ
I really miss balance, I was out somewhere not long back, and to get a shot of something(I forget what) I had to get close to the edge of a drop, not a big drop, about five feet, but I could not stop shaking, this from a bloke who used to walk across the ridge tiles on a house, who climb mill chimneys for a bet. I know your writing about a different balance Tara, and I feel that part of me isn't too bad at all, its the physical side of me that hurts, the mental side is pretty good. Excellent prose, a joy to read. Bravo!!!!!!
NekhbetSun
Wonderful, wise words dear Tara S
fredster66
Wonderful work here!
lucindawind
wonderful Namaste !
Merrylee
Excellent Tara!!!
faroutsider
Wonderfully balanced prose!
ontar1
Cool, excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gwenevere
Very deep, can go on reading it over and over again.
bmac62
Did you ever see the little toys called Weebles? Weebles wobble but they don't fall down:) Hon, you know, I never would have taken this so light heartedly if I was commenting close to when you wrote this. But here, 13 1/2 months later, I think I can make you smile. I know you are in balance on the last night of 2009:)