Thinking Out Loud by beachzz

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Nov 23, 2008

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Thinking Out Loud Sitting here in my chair Looking out my window Wondering what’s in the air Waiting to surprise me I think about the day What it might hold Hoping against hope today Might be the one Waiting to hear What I want to know Even though it’s fear Of the real truth Truth can set you free Heard those words Yet again meant for me To guide me on this path I listen and try To keep those words close I understand why I am how I am I can make that move So my life will be better I won’t have to prove Myself ever again Till then I am sitting Waiting for the day Knowing that quitting Is not an option 11/21/08

Comments (12)

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efron_241

2:17AM | Sun, 23 November 2008

well.. my thinking would stop as i enjoy the view over such landscape what a wonderful view My English is not good enough to read it all but the text seems good too ! Great

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Susank

2:30AM | Sun, 23 November 2008

Great poem. And the pic is super

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tallpindo

4:57AM | Sun, 23 November 2008

Open your wallet. Make a trail of dollar bills going out your front door. Then follow it. (Does anyone ever get it that I find huge egos and motivational forms monstrously funny)

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Thelby

5:15AM | Sun, 23 November 2008

Yes the truth will set you free, but many people after they gain their freedom would rather be enslaved to the lies, very sad!!!! Nice work on this poem/story!!!

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auntietk

7:52AM | Sun, 23 November 2008

I like what you've done with the 1-3 rhyming. It leaves me with a feeling of sitting on the edge of my seat, waiting ... Nicely done!

PD154

8:01AM | Sun, 23 November 2008

You chose a good picture to match these words Maz. well done

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hipps13

3:45PM | Sun, 23 November 2008

I so understand wonderful work warm hug, Linda

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goodoleboy

5:19PM | Sun, 23 November 2008

We have nothing to fear but fear itself (Franklin Delano Roosevelt).

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vaggabondd

6:57PM | Sun, 23 November 2008

I have spent many hours looking through the window just wondering, Very nicely written my poet friend. I like your photos but I love your poetry, Very nice

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Chipka

7:18AM | Mon, 24 November 2008

I've been in a similar position, wondering what the future will bring, what challenges the day will demand I face, or what answers linger just beyond my ability to reach them...it's a fundamental element of the human condition, and you've captured it brilliantly. What the day brings is always something never revealed until...well...until it's revealed and at times, all we can do is sit and wait...something I've become far too familiar with! But ah...this is a lovely poem, its truth is such a part of its beauty too!

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