Do You? by beachzz

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Jan 04, 2009

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Do You? I never know If you think of me As often As I think of you Probably not For sometimes It seems I think of nothing else Sometimes a moment Or two will pass That there isn’t A thought of you And then There you are Back in my mind Not leaving me alone I think of a line “Out, damned spot” From another Far better writer I only wish It were that easy To get my Mind back For it seems I’ve lost it 12/30/08

Comments (15)

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auntietk

2:38AM | Sun, 04 January 2009

I hate it when that happens. Well written!

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3x3

2:41AM | Sun, 04 January 2009

touching!lovely written!

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Thelby

4:49AM | Sun, 04 January 2009

Oh don't lose it, it can be hard to find ;^D

PD154

7:56AM | Sun, 04 January 2009

Very thought provoking words Maz.

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artaddict2

8:20AM | Sun, 04 January 2009

Oh Yes I Know where you are coming from with these words, doesn't that just drive you crazy!

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anahata.c

8:26AM | Sun, 04 January 2009

a modern day love poem, friend or lover, and true feelings about trying to get our minds back after thinking of someone we'd like closer to us...and your Macbeth quote ("Out, damned spot") is perfect for your visual, an orb almost pestered by that big blue 'spot' (a lover? a person? our own nagging need for a person?) Losing one's mind in the thoughts of someone else: Another bard quote: "When to the sessions of sweet silent thought/I summon up remembrance of things past..." Sweet & frustrated remembrance. Your art & words work perfectly for your thought. You have a real way with the short concise line; very nice work, Marilyn...

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gypsyflame

9:59AM | Sun, 04 January 2009

I have some of those "bitter sweet rememberances" too. And when I have them so many emotions flood through me, even being angry at this person for making me feel the way I do. But I can also smile at the happier memories because for a time, they did bring love and laughter in to my life. Well written Marliyn, you do have a way with words and bringing your emotions to the surface where we can all share in your feelings!

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hipps13

10:57AM | Sun, 04 January 2009

me too wonderful words thanks for the thought now I forgot what I was going to say thanks for the sunshine it sure is welcome warm hug, Linda

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awjay

1:13PM | Sun, 04 January 2009

super words

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jocko500

3:39PM | Sun, 04 January 2009

lost your mind lol I just can see it on tv as some one picks up a part of the flest off his front yard and say" guess they lost this on they walks" you know; the ads they show on TV on loseing wieght. anyway this is wonderful poem

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goodoleboy

5:07PM | Sun, 04 January 2009

...take this man/woman to be your lawfully wedded man/wife? Love your narrative and accompanying supernovae image, M!

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brother_meed

9:36PM | Tue, 06 January 2009

... Assert Confirm Leading to: Affirmation Very Positive with just a bit of internal self-doubt Heart with Mind You are quite alright and okay by me b.

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