The Secret by Alealonna
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In the dark world of Ardore
From generations long before
A knowledge hidden deep within
Guarded by the secret kin
Protected by an unknown power
Cursed by envy and devour
Death protects it with it's sight
Untouched by day, untouched by night
Locked away with shattered key
For no eyes to ever see
Never broken from the whole
It's the secret of the soul
Sorry that I haven't posted anything lately. I haven't really found anything to photograph, so i'm waiting for something good to come. Instead, I decided to start a little story for you. I haven't planned out the plot, I don't know what is going to happen with it, but my best stories seem to be like that anyways. This is the opening of it.
I also wanted to thank everyone for the support that you have given me. It means a lot to me in these bad times. So, Thank you.
Comments (6)
blainenorth
Excellent start..looking forward to more. Hope things are going good...keep up the spirit..I need to hear from you.
Faemike55
Looking forward to the story!
barryjeffer
An excellent start... don't stop. If you like I will add some images to your poetry... up to you. a kinsman, seth
Iceshark39
Magnificent prose! Perhaps you should collaborate with some of your fellow artists to make images for your words. I know I would be honoured to. Looking forward to reading more.
vaggabondd
there are so many secrets that are hidden for no one to see, but they haunt you at night. very nice my poet friend
anahata.c
enchanting & mysterious opening to a tale...I felt it was an opening even before you told us it was, which means you really accomplished what you wanted. And it's wonderful that you have people (above) who want to do images with you. (That's a high compliment!) Sorry for your difficult times...people always told us that if you create, it will lift the pain. Welllllllll, not quite! Not exactly, sorry people...but to create while in pain is an act of courage; and your seeking a journey to the center of the soul is a wonderful way to move through and beyond whatever you're going through, and it makes it illumined for everyone else. I'll look forward to more...