My Erotic Comic: Pages 6-7-8 by dphoadley
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Tell if you can understand who these guys are from what they are saying.
DPH
Comments (14)
Indoda
The last line made me laugh - yup I can unnerstan all they's sayin'. Livin' in oil country helps ;) Very well done - images, poses, lighting and balloon bubbles all are first class - keep up the good my friend
romangirl
Love the conversation!
Fidelity2
You are an artist. An amazing one. 5+.
VDH
Fun composition!!
fls13
This is looking very good Dave . . . . now get to the dirty stuff. :O)
drifterlee
Wonderful scenes, Dave!!!!
jugoth
Well at least they going texas lets hope they find an english speaking part.
erlandpil
You are an artist. Erland
Biffowitz
Cool storyline and artwork, keep it up my friend!
Larry F
Great looking stuff, DPH! I gotta tell you, this is just marvelous! Your handling of the type is exceeded only by the overall high quality of the end product! Way to go, good buddy!
Elcet
Funny sequence, done with nice stuff. May I suggest, however, the following modifications: i) Compose the picts from rough sketches to take into account the surface of balloons, e.g. if you need big balloons with a lot of text compose the image with "uninteresting" elements that the balloons can occupy, e.g. a big sky, a wall etc, ii) Put those text elements outside the main picture elements, iii) Do limit the balloons to a number of four per panel, the best being one or 2. If you need more, create another panel to continue the dialog between the characters. What matters the most in a comics is the image, the balloons coming in support of the graphic elements; however I recognize that the text has an importance of its own because it contributes to the mood of the story and it explains elements. Do continue the good work my friend!
kasalin
Stunning idea and realization !!! Excellent composition, looks fantastic! 5*
kobaltkween
i think this is moving along great. you're doing an excellent job. but i'd way cut down on the text. pick up a comic or two, or maybe take a look at an online comic. The Dreamland Chronicles is done by a comic artist who decided to publish his own 3d work. and as Elcet suggests, he worked from sketches.
clifftoppler
Yes, the speech balloons rather take over, but you're working at the background. A smaller text might work better, but contemplate priorities.