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Afraid To Let Go

Writers Surrealism posted on Apr 11, 2009
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In this moment of time In my life I feel a great weakness As I sit all alone In my mind I feel like a master pianist Who has been intent On playing chop sticks Ignoring the passion Of the music boiling inside of me I am not sure If I am afraid of failure Or success There is nothing sadder Than a bird with strong wings Who is afraid to fly I find myself in this place In my heart I feel like I am holding onto a limb Afraid to let go And I don’t know why

Comments (11)


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Meisiekind

2:50PM | Sat, 11 April 2009

Dear friend - you are speaking right into my heart with this poem... Can you read minds? Wonderful and very touching... :)

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flaviok

5:35PM | Sat, 11 April 2009

Maginifico, poema sensivel e profundo meu aigo, aplausos (5)

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brycek

6:13PM | Sat, 11 April 2009

Touching poem Randy..nicely done!!

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Faemike55

6:23PM | Sat, 11 April 2009

Very moving poem. I think we all feel that way at one time or another.

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BlackWidow77

11:38PM | Sat, 11 April 2009

...oh my God! I feel like you write your poems to me. I know how it feels to be afraid of both success and failure. The feeling of being alone. I'm so touched by your words. You are an amazing person and you do beautiful work.

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beachzz

1:54AM | Sun, 12 April 2009

spread your wings and fly leave the earth below soar

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auntietk

2:44AM | Sun, 12 April 2009

Powerful writing ... this is really well done!

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momzi

8:09AM | Sun, 12 April 2009

Your poem captured my heart, i do feel this way too.

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hipps13

5:50PM | Sun, 12 April 2009

wonderful work, Randy warm hug, Linda

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The_D_List

1:52PM | Mon, 13 April 2009

get out of my head!!!! l.o.l.!

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Merrylee

11:21AM | Tue, 14 April 2009

That's me Randy afraid to let go of Roger...he wanted me, I didn't want him, and now he doesn't want me...crazy world..


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